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Out of Love

Is this how it feels when you fall out of love? It feels like the stars are falling from above. The world is ripped from you unsuspecting hands. You find yourself wondering through new lands. Trying to hold on to what was good in the past finding more reasons this thing will never last. Words left unspoken thus far seem to slip through your lips and reality slips from your grip. You feel like you're on a non-stop trip. Trying to figure out why you wound up here in the first place, it seems like you will never win the race. Everyone else is going a different pace. The world spins faster and faster then stops abruptly as you begin to fall. You try to walk but can only crawl.

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Date: 6/18/2014 4:10:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Kandy :) - I choose your first very well written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2014 7:43:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Kandy. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/16/2014 4:06:00 PM
No, that's not it. That happens when the one you love stops loving you..........When one falls out of love it's sweet.............KLove *
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:56:00 PM
Hi Kandy, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Kandy Brant
Date: 6/15/2014 8:04:00 PM
Thank you for the very kind welcome.
Date: 6/15/2014 5:53:00 PM
Kandy,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/15/2014 4:18:00 PM
Great spiraling ride. You should put the form as a free verse or rhyme though, ABC poems are like acrostic, using the first letter of a word to spell along the alphabet in sequence. otherwise your poem had a great ride to it :)
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Kandy Brant
Date: 6/15/2014 4:51:00 PM
Thank you :)

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