Out of Eden

Out of Eden


Through life I tread and restless, toil ….
… in sorrow - in remorse.
“Oh why, oh why?”, myself I ask, 
I’m surely not to blame.

But then my world around collapsed…
…so useless I exist.
“I’ll try. I’ll try”, out loud I cried,
needs must, I will survive.

This mount of woes, I scale with hope…
…and further I shall climb.
How high, how high, shall be my goal
Let not the doubts defeat.

I near the peak, through God-assist…
…I found my strength in faith.
And by and by the goal I reach
God Will - the fight I’ll win.

The fight is on, I’m armed to hilt…
…this mountain I did climb.
I cry “Veni, Vidi Vici”…
…I’ve reached my Heavenly Home!!

(The Fg 81.5.8)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/17/2015 3:04:00 AM
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Date: 12/1/2015 11:19:00 AM
If God be for us who can reign agin us? Great write Robert. God Bless. D.
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Date: 8/31/2015 3:15:00 AM
- A very good poem, Robert ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Robert Amure
Date: 8/31/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. I hope most of my works will please. Even from days of being a boy, I approached all with smiles and joy. Should it be I find some success, I shall laud you and P-Soup to excess! Love and Blessings. B
Date: 8/30/2015 3:10:00 PM
Hi Robert, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Robert Amure
Date: 8/31/2015 4:47:00 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome SKAT, and the kind greeting. There's nothing much to tell about me, as life is so fleeting. I live to love as long as I love to live ...but to make some believe, is so hard to achieve. I muse and amuse, I croon and I Worship. Thanks for the hugs and friendship. Hope you enjoy (most of) the poems. Love, hugs and blessings. B
Date: 8/30/2015 12:25:00 PM
Robert, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Robert Amure
Date: 8/31/2015 4:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind introductory words Linda. It's great to know there are the likes of you around. I shall endeavour to present varied poetry tastes; from simple one-liners, to epics with an incantatory sound. There's no better a trend than a new Poet Friend. B
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