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There was a fearless Ninja boy Who’s mighty sword he’d oft deploy Till with nunchucks one his bell did ring And put an end to his Ninjaing Made his sword look like a toy
11/6/2011

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Date: 11/17/2011 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with your "Ninja Limerick" poem Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/17/2011 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Carol
Date: 11/15/2011 9:37:00 AM
very cute limerick! done in by unchucks poor thing. anyway, i love ninjaing as a verb. congrats on your win!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/15/2011 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Susan
Date: 11/13/2011 10:36:00 AM
A Ninja brought down to earth, nice one Bob. Many congratulations on your win in the contest :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/13/2011 11:02:00 AM
Thanks James
Date: 11/12/2011 12:35:00 AM
Hey, I see you made the winner's list. Congratulations, Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/12/2011 7:52:00 AM
Yup, thankfully.
Date: 11/11/2011 8:52:00 PM
Congrats Bob on another wonderful win for this excellent ninja Limerick luv..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/12/2011 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Linda-Marie
Date: 11/11/2011 1:24:00 PM
oh my. good poem.- JH
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/11/2011 1:38:00 PM
Thank you J.H.
Date: 11/11/2011 1:05:00 PM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Bob. And thanks for explaining nunchucks to me. This is a very clever write! Love, Carolyn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/11/2011 1:38:00 PM
Thanks for checking it out Carolyn.
Date: 11/11/2011 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations Bob, although not quite sure what "nunchucks " are I put my own interpretation to it and had a good giggle. x
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/11/2011 8:35:00 AM
They are two metal bars connected by a length of chain. Thanks for the kudos Mandy
Date: 11/11/2011 12:56:00 AM
BOB~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, for your super ninja entry. Thank you for supporting my Sneaky Ninja contest* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/11/2011 8:36:00 AM
Thank you for selecting my entry PD.
Date: 11/7/2011 9:31:00 PM
This is a cool one and good title too, Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/7/2011 10:56:00 PM
Think so? Me too. Thanks Andrea
Date: 11/7/2011 9:06:00 AM
LOL, good one, Bob. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/7/2011 10:35:00 AM
Thanks much Jack
Date: 11/6/2011 1:29:00 PM
awww, poor kid! Funny one, Bob, good luck in the 'test! Beauty day to ya, namaste~N
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/6/2011 2:05:00 PM
Thanks Nancy
Date: 11/6/2011 12:58:00 PM
This is too cute my friend. A cousin of mine tried those numchuks once and said he now understood why they called them "numchuks". Just once with those things and Chuck was indeed numb.;) God Bless, JB
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/6/2011 1:26:00 PM
Yup, they can really hurt you if you are not trained Judy.
Date: 11/6/2011 9:04:00 AM
Bob, thank you for the support. Have yourself a lovely Sunday, take care, ;-),.. P.d.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/6/2011 10:10:00 AM
Thanks PD and and a great Sunday to you as well
Date: 11/6/2011 8:53:00 AM
This is really cute, Bob. I'm assuming a "nunchuck" is a type of weapon? Don't know much about the Ninjas, but I enjoyed your poem -- so playful! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/6/2011 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn and yes it is. Two metal bars connected by a length of chain. Quite difficult to master without cleaning your own clock:)

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