Out Ninja'D

There was a fearless Ninja boy Who’s mighty sword he’d oft deploy Till with nunchucks one his bell did ring And put an end to his Ninjaing Made his sword look like a toy
11/6/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations on your win with your "Ninja Limerick" poem Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 8:10 AM
Thanks Carol
Susan Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 9:37 AM
very cute limerick! done in by unchucks poor thing. anyway, i love ninjaing as a verb. congrats on your win!
Quigley Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Susan
Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 10:36 AM
A Ninja brought down to earth, nice one Bob. Many congratulations on your win in the contest :)
Quigley Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Thanks James
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 12:35 AM
Hey, I see you made the winner's list. Congratulations, Bob.
Quigley Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Yup, thankfully.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Congrats Bob on another wonderful win for this excellent ninja Limerick luv..
Quigley Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Thanks Linda-Marie
J.T. Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 1:24 PM
oh my. good poem.- JH
Quigley Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 1:38 PM
Thank you J.H.
Devonshire Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 1:05 PM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Bob. And thanks for explaining nunchucks to me. This is a very clever write! Love, Carolyn
Quigley Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 1:38 PM
Thanks for checking it out Carolyn.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 2:41 AM
Congratulations Bob, although not quite sure what "nunchucks " are I put my own interpretation to it and had a good giggle. x
Quigley Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 8:35 AM
They are two metal bars connected by a length of chain. Thanks for the kudos Mandy
A   Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 12:56 AM
BOB~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, for your super ninja entry. Thank you for supporting my Sneaky Ninja contest* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Quigley Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Thank you for selecting my entry PD.
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:31 PM
This is a cool one and good title too, Bob.
Quigley Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:56 PM
Think so? Me too. Thanks Andrea
Horne Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:06 AM
LOL, good one, Bob. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )
Quigley Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Thanks much Jack
Jones Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 1:29 PM
awww, poor kid! Funny one, Bob, good luck in the 'test! Beauty day to ya, namaste~N
Quigley Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Thanks Nancy
Ball Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 12:58 PM
This is too cute my friend. A cousin of mine tried those numchuks once and said he now understood why they called them "numchuks". Just once with those things and Chuck was indeed numb.;) God Bless, JB
Quigley Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Yup, they can really hurt you if you are not trained Judy.
A   Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 9:04 AM
Bob, thank you for the support. Have yourself a lovely Sunday, take care, ;-),.. P.d.
Quigley Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Thanks PD and and a great Sunday to you as well
Devonshire Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 8:53 AM
This is really cute, Bob. I'm assuming a "nunchuck" is a type of weapon? Don't know much about the Ninjas, but I enjoyed your poem -- so playful! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Quigley Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Carolyn and yes it is. Two metal bars connected by a length of chain. Quite difficult to master without cleaning your own clock:)
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