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Out My Window

It was hours before dawn and I could not sleep.
The gloomy fog overpowered the cold dark street.
The street lights offered patches of misty light.
Rain had glossed the pavement, in the dead of night.
From my window I saw the publican escorting old Joe.
Put him out in the street, he closed the pub hours ago.
My yawning fogged the window as he toddled home.
Last of the rain flowed down the gutters leaving foam.
The eerie silence matched the cold dark grey scene.
A more lonely looking place, there had never been.
Scraps of paper and food wrappers were tumbling,
Pushed along by a breeze as I watched Joe stumbling.
He made it to his gate down the end of the road.
A truck carrying newspapers slung off its load,
Plastic wrapped and landed at the newsagent’s door.
I hoped to watch the deserted street, just a bit more.
To see the sunrise and it be busy with people galore.
Such a transformation was worth waiting for.
To see vehicles appear, all come alive in early morn.
But my bed called and I fell asleep before the dawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 9:45 PM
The empty street before the wee hours of the morning glimpsed through your window is so fascinating ! You have an eye for detail and your descriptions are life like. Old Joe being escorted home is a lively picture. All the Best dear SV.
Volumes Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 12:37 AM
If I cant be great my dear friend, I strive to be unique. It counts for something in this world. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. It is so valued.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 3:15 PM
Hello Speaks Volumes, We see a lot of things from our window. when the lsky is deem i see cats on branches of the tree. Or the bushes shapes of a cat. I also saw a blue cloud shaped in a heart. Above this cloud i saw a pink cloud. Enjoy your evening mhy friend. /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Hello Speaks Volumes, good afternoon. You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
Volumes Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:31 PM
Thank you so much
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