Out Here, We Are Stars

Out here,
where time forgets its name
and distance wears no shoes,
a single atom dreams
of being seen.

A nebula breathes in slow creation—
a phosphorous wound
stitched by light,
spilling stars like secrets
never meant for mouths.

What lilt remains in the voice of the void?
Even silence has shape here—
serpentine,
a slither of ancient radiation
wrapping the bones of galaxies,
like a mother tucking in
what she cannot keep.

We call it space,
but it’s more:
a cascade of almosts,
of might-have-beens and never-weres,
falling endlessly
through a gravity
that remembers everything
but forgives nothing.

The lunar dust knows—
how soft it is to vanish,
how even your footprints
can outlive your breath.

And Earth, blue with burden,
floats like a question
we’ve stopped trying to answer—
spinning myths into maths,
naming fire with numbers,
hoping to out-code
the ache.

There is a myriad of ways to be alone.
But here,
in this tender, terrible expanse,
we are together
in our unknowing.

And maybe that
is enough
to make us stars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hamilton Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 11:24 AM
First time reading you Aaliyah, my niece has the same name. You are a budding poetry star I can sense these things. How refreshing to see your take on the cosmos and questions of eternity. Enjoyed the read and will make you a new fave poet.
Anaya Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 5:11 PM
Ah, you used so many of the words required, and your universe comes alive , so much to feel and you made it look so easy, hurrah'z! A striking title "Out Here We Are Stars" Excellent entry. Speaking of do you model? I was looking at gothic stuff and getty images pulled up models that look alike~ awesome if you do, you are so cool, Aalyah. BOl in contest! Im glad to have made your acquaintance ~Anaya
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June 1, 2025 at 11:34 AM
Your poem left me speechless in the best way. It’s an exquisite meditation on existence, cosmic scale, and the aching vulnerability of being human. The opening lines already carry such grace, "Out here, where time forgets its name and distance wears no shoes", Immediately I felt untethered, gently pulled into a place where familiar rules dissolve.
O'Neil Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 5:27 PM
Thank you so much for your deeply thoughtful and moving response. I’m truly touched that the poem resonated with you on such a profound level. Those opening lines were meant to invite readers into that very space of gentle suspension, so I’m glad they carried the grace you describe. Your words mean a great deal to me—thank you for sharing your experience.
Wolf Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 10:21 PM
I think that this is just brilliant, Aaliyah. A super-fave for me. Thank you!! Ad astra per aspera, Gershon
O'Neil Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 5:26 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. I’m truly honoured to be one of your favourites. Your encouragement means a great deal. Ad astra per aspera—here’s to reaching the stars through hardships. Thank you again.
Hind Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 4:02 PM
"There is a myriad of ways to be alone." Now that is syntax.
O'Neil Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 5:19 PM
Thank you. I’m glad that line stood out to you—crafting the right syntax to capture complex emotions is always a rewarding challenge. Appreciate your kind words.
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