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Our Words and Pasts We Share

I am the one of us As you are the one as i We write from our hearts And watch our poetry ply Our words grow from our thoughts And grace surfaces we scribe All words are free to us For its in our writes transcribed We write about our pasts And the times in our lives Of nature and its wars Where daily life decides About the rights and wrongs Families and our friends Cooking up such delights About our past times and our trends We even write about our lost And why they are no longer here If even for their moment That they graced this beautiful sphere As you read the writes of i Whilst i read the writes of you Our writings in us write The writes of me and you

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Janette Fisher

Date: 4/10/2010 12:24:00 PM

James - you are awesome - yes we do share so many experiences through our writing I know that over the last couple of months it has been my saviour and helped me to cope. Thanks for the comments on my recently posted pieces - Miss Jekyll is not so little any more my girls are now 25 and 27 but both of them are still my princesses. Much love Janette

Kim M

Date: 4/10/2010 9:34:00 AM

Spendid! I'm adding you to my favorites.

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 4/10/2010 7:51:00 AM

Yes we do share a lot with each other here on the Soup...don't we James. Which helps in many ways for people to be able to cope. Writing frees the soul!! I will keep enjoying the writes of you!! Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful and eloquent piece and for taking the time to read mine! Have a gloriously blessed day in bonnie Scotland!! ~Mary~