Our Words and Pasts We Share

I am the one of us
As you are the one as i
We write from our hearts
And watch our poetry ply

Our words grow from our thoughts
And grace surfaces we scribe
All words are free to us
For its in our writes transcribed

We write about our pasts 
And the times in our lives
Of nature and its wars
Where daily life decides

About the rights and wrongs
Families and our friends
Cooking up such delights 
About our past times and our trends

We even write about our lost
And why they are no longer here
If even for their moment
That they graced this beautiful sphere

As you read the writes of i
Whilst i read the writes of you
Our writings in us write
The writes of me and you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/10/2010 12:24:00 PM
James - you are awesome - yes we do share so many experiences through our writing I know that over the last couple of months it has been my saviour and helped me to cope. Thanks for the comments on my recently posted pieces - Miss Jekyll is not so little any more my girls are now 25 and 27 but both of them are still my princesses. Much love Janette
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:34:00 AM
Spendid! I'm adding you to my favorites.
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Date: 4/10/2010 7:51:00 AM
Yes we do share a lot with each other here on the Soup...don't we James. Which helps in many ways for people to be able to cope. Writing frees the soul!! I will keep enjoying the writes of you!! Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful and eloquent piece and for taking the time to read mine! Have a gloriously blessed day in bonnie Scotland!! ~Mary~
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Date: 4/9/2010 11:35:00 PM
nicely written
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:11:00 PM
Nice expressions. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 4/9/2010 7:54:00 PM
I love the writes of YOU..BG
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Date: 4/9/2010 3:12:00 PM
DELIGHTFUL READ JAMES
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:36:00 PM
Que linda!!! how lovely!!!! love Simone
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