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I will be loving you my darling forever, we found love in a simple longing glance; your sweet smile is forever in my memory, under a thousand blinking stars above. You asked me to be your wife. and we married on Valentines Day; our love will never, ever grow old. I thought our love would never, ever fade, you took me right into your strong arms; on a winter February 14, Valentines Day, under a thousand soft snowflakes falling. We kissed and said, I do together, with our beating hearts; we promised to love when wrinkled old. You were my one true and only love, was it all just part of my life's destiny; our beautiful winter wedding now a memory, a Valentines treasure until my mind fades. Yes, we had found love in a glance . . . then, your heart went deathly cold. __________________________ January 28, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Our Wedding Copyright Protected, ID 16-1071-241-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, No. 505, Standard sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 10/24/2018 9:44:00 AM
Thank you John, Greg, and Line for visiting with comments and congratulations ~
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Date: 10/22/2018 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance.
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Date: 10/18/2018 7:07:00 PM
Nicely done, Constance - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 10/17/2018 11:30:00 AM
Constance, I thought this was a such beautiful love poem right up to the last line...ah, yes you always did prefer the dark side. A nicely written oldie but goldie, congrats on your win, Dear Heart. John
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