Get Your Premium Membership

Our Valentine of Love

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sandra Haight.


Our Valentine of Love Your tender smile, my fleeting glance, Warm eyes that meet to touch the soul, Your beating heart, my breathless breath, Our deepened sense of something whole. Our need to please and give of self, To share all things of mind and heart With openness and sweet surrender, Each of the whole becomes a part. Your touch of closeness and of warmth, My radiance of inner glow, Bathe in light of endless aura... Our current charged with endless flow. To feel each other's joy and pain, Two beating hearts, as one, to care. And of the thoughts that words can't speak, Two open souls, in silence, share. To show our love through word and song Is at its best, mere child’s play, In contrast to the silent prose Our hearts and souls, through love, convey. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Premier Contest: Sweet Valentine Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Judged: 02/01/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/4/2018 1:36:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Sandra.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:17:00 PM
Line, thank you again for your wonderful visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/3/2018 3:17:00 PM
Congrats Sandra on your top placement.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. I appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Sandra :)
Date: 2/1/2018 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful second placement Sandra! I especially identified with your third stanza in this romantic poem! : )
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. I am so pleased that you like it and appreciate your lovely comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/1/2018 8:27:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on this lovely piece.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 2/4/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve, for your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/1/2015 3:48:00 PM
SANDRA, Awesome magic win.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~
Login to Reply
Date: 1/31/2015 6:56:00 PM
Congrad's on Your win. So pleasant to read your verse this evening. No wonder it ranked so high, well constructed, excellent use of half rhyme! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Debbie. I appreciate your positive comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/31/2015 12:33:00 AM
What a lovely valentine to send or to receive. Congratulations on your win.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 1/31/2015 10:43:00 AM
Hi Joyce, so nice of your to stop by with your nice comment and congratulations. I really appreciate it. Sandra
Date: 1/30/2015 11:22:00 PM
Enjoyable romantic poem, congrats on the win, Sandra
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 1/31/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram, for your continued support! Sandra
Date: 1/30/2015 6:14:00 PM
Such a delightful romantic poem many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 1/31/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. I always appreciate your supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/26/2015 6:48:00 PM
a very poetic expression of your deep love. WEll done. Mystic will love it!!
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 1/27/2015 4:56:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Always nice to read your encouraging comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/26/2015 10:01:00 AM
awwwh, this makes me swoon, Sandra... charming message of sweet love!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 1/27/2015 4:57:00 PM
Hello Nette, so nice of you to stop by with positive comment. Thanks so much. Sandra
Date: 1/24/2015 2:01:00 PM
Excellent poem Sandra. I thought the lines were too long though. One or two less words would have given you more control I think. Just a thought. This is very well written just the same.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 1/25/2015 6:46:00 AM
Thank you Trevor. I appreciate your supportive comments. I think sometimes extra words are put in to keep the meter and syllable count consistent, as in this poem, 8 syllables and 4 beats per line. Sandra
Date: 1/23/2015 5:22:00 PM
Right on, Sandra. This will steal the judge's heart and the heart of all the true romantics!
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 1/25/2015 6:47:00 AM
Thanks for your supportive comment, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/23/2015 11:58:00 AM
Loved it and can definitely relate. Great job here.
Login to Reply
Haight Avatar
Sandra Haight
Date: 1/23/2015 3:00:00 PM
So nice of you to stop by to read my poem and express your nice comment. I really appreciate it! Thank you, Sandra

Book: Reflection on the Important Things