Chris Green Poet Free verse

Our Universe

~*~

She floated down 
    on a shimmering 
  moonbeam
       and my eyes
    saw starlight
         glowing in her 
   cosmic smile
        as perfect love
       orbited my
                heart
          and the
               universe
                     became ours

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Hello There September 10, 2019 at 3:15 PM Delightful image, Chris! A vision easy for me to imagine (I'm certain I already have ;) Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 3:44 PM Thanks so much my friend and I am happy your imagination seems to be similar to mine. :)

Beautiful Scars September 10, 2019 at 10:00 AM awww how sweet, reminds me of my hubby. Love the layout too :) -luloo Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 10:16 AM Thanks so much Lu Loo. I am happy you liked this one.

Kim Rodrigues September 10, 2019 at 9:34 AM Ahhh...thanks for the imagery! Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 9:42 AM You're welcome. : ) Thank you for the kind words.

Heidi Sands September 10, 2019 at 7:08 AM A beautiful poem of uniting. Softly written from the heart :) Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 8:06 AM Thank you so much my friend for everything you do for me.

Vijay Pandit September 10, 2019 at 6:59 AM Loved the poem and your trademark ending. Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thanks Vijay, I am glad you liked it

Caren Krutsinger September 10, 2019 at 3:31 AM Beautiful write, Chris. Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you so much Caren

Charlotte Watkins September 10, 2019 at 1:01 AM I love how the words melt and form together so dreamily. Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you Charlotte, I appreciate your kind thoughts this morning

Line Gauthier September 9, 2019 at 11:03 PM Lovely, Chris. A FAVE for me. Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM Thank you so much my friend.

John Hamilton September 9, 2019 at 9:34 PM Very nicely done Chris! Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM Thanks so much John.

Brenda Chiri September 9, 2019 at 8:33 PM Very beautiful Chris!;) see I still wish I could write like you! Such beauty and warmth in your words!;) Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM Whatever, your poetry is absolutely beautiful, but I thank you for your kind words. Your comment has made my day.

Sandra Adams September 9, 2019 at 7:26 PM sensual and romantic write Chris...you have a way with words to make them float softly down across the page... beautifully penned :) hugs Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 8:00 AM Thank you so very much Sandra for coaxing my smile out this morning with your wonderful comment.

John Lawless September 9, 2019 at 6:43 PM oh you devil you...... Chris Green September 10, 2019 at 7:59 AM :) Thanks John.