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Our Universe

~*~ She floated down on a shimmering moonbeam and my eyes saw starlight glowing in her cosmic smile as perfect love orbited my heart and the universe became ours

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Date: 9/10/2019 3:15:00 PM

Delightful image, Chris! A vision easy for me to imagine (I'm certain I already have ;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 3:44:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend and I am happy your imagination seems to be similar to mine. :)

Lu Loo

Date: 9/10/2019 10:00:00 AM

awww how sweet, reminds me of my hubby. Love the layout too :) -luloo

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 10:16:00 AM

Thanks so much Lu Loo. I am happy you liked this one.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/10/2019 9:34:00 AM

Ahhh...thanks for the imagery!

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 9:42:00 AM

You're welcome. : ) Thank you for the kind words.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/10/2019 7:08:00 AM

A beautiful poem of uniting. Softly written from the heart :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:06:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend for everything you do for me.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/10/2019 6:59:00 AM

Loved the poem and your trademark ending.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Vijay, I am glad you liked it

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 3:31:00 AM

Beautiful write, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Caren

Charlotte Watkins

Date: 9/10/2019 1:01:00 AM

I love how the words melt and form together so dreamily.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank you Charlotte, I appreciate your kind thoughts this morning

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/9/2019 11:03:00 PM

Lovely, Chris. A FAVE for me.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/9/2019 9:34:00 PM

Very nicely done Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:01:00 AM

Thanks so much John.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/9/2019 8:33:00 PM

Very beautiful Chris!;) see I still wish I could write like you! Such beauty and warmth in your words!;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:01:00 AM

Whatever, your poetry is absolutely beautiful, but I thank you for your kind words. Your comment has made my day.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/9/2019 7:26:00 PM

sensual and romantic write Chris...you have a way with words to make them float softly down across the page... beautifully penned :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sandra for coaxing my smile out this morning with your wonderful comment.

John Lawless

Date: 9/9/2019 6:43:00 PM

oh you devil you......

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 7:59:00 AM

:) Thanks John.