Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Quatrain

Our Uni-Song

OUR UNI-SONG

If only you are near, 
  dear, how I'd like to stay here
You are so special,
   my core nuclei among all celestial

Can I hold you close 
  as if each day our last to rose?
With your sturdy heat gaze 
  slowly consume me with each phase

Together we'll make ends meet,
  I know united as one we can't be beat
Dancing pressed in the moonlight; 
  like an gulp of raw champagne delight

Next to each other 
  a sunset treasure, we can ponder.
Facing tomorrows one at a time, 
  love knots in pirouette notes of rhyme.

Building a family drive by sheer affection 
   Us - our uni-song, we sing without hesitation.
My very soul rejoice if it's all you I befall.
   And if this life ends suddenly--

Don't you ever forget I am forever with thee...

© O.E.Guillermo
9:23 pm, November 15, 2014

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Paul Callus November 19, 2014 at 1:31 PM Deep romantic feelings flow from this page, Olive_eloi! You promise your eternal true love to a lucky partner, on earth and in the after life. Well dine! // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 20, 2015 at 8:26 AM thanks much paul.. :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 17, 2014 at 5:10 AM "like an gulp of raw champagne delight" splendid- perfect olive. Love XXXXX rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 17, 2014 at 6:51 AM Thanks much Rajat.. :)! I appreciate your drop by.. :D!

Justin Bordner November 16, 2014 at 8:57 PM Love in life, love in death, love in every breath...you've passed the threshold of affection Olive, you are deep within the unilove zone. I'm awed by the unbridled admission of your love for your partner." My core nuclei smong the celestial...Building a family drive by sheer affection." Deep feelings and metaphysics Olive...J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 17, 2014 at 12:11 AM :D hahahaha so are all encourage to love and spread love.. :D! but don't have yet that partner.. this just some thoughts i have of my yearning to love.. :D! thanks much for dropping by.. :D! as always you are so generous with your comments, so encouraging.. :D!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2014 at 12:37 PM - A beautiful and romantic poem Olive - Love is a better teacher than a philosopher - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 17, 2014 at 12:09 AM Indeed it is.. lots of verses in the Bible talks about love.. :)! but oh, the whole speaks of God's love.. :)! hope you did have a lovely weekend.. :D!

James Fraser November 15, 2014 at 9:30 AM Love the line, a gulp of raw champagne delight. Endearing poetry Olive, warm and heartfelt, James :) :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 17, 2014 at 12:07 AM :D thanks MR. JAmes.. :)!