Our Summer Fun

The summer sun shined in the sky like a jewel. Dad and daughter happily played in the waves. Beach sand was hot but the saltwater felt cool. This day in my memory, I'll always save. A ride on Dad's shoulders always made me smile. Holding my hand, we walked the beach for a mile. My dad wearing flip flops and his cut off jeans, searching for shells, my mind's eye relives the scene. Hot dogs in hand as sea gulls swooped down to spy, hoping to steal a bite of our beach cuisine. Sodas in cans, rock and roll played in hifi, bare feet in the sand, body doused in sunscreen. Details have faded over the many years, but this day's imprinted behind salted tears. A vision of ocean sparkling in the sun, hearing Dad's laugh on the shore, our summer fun By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, April 14, 2012 for A Summer Memory contest (Frank Herrera) Third place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/4/2012 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "A Summer Memory" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:09:00 PM
A beautiful time clearly remembered. Congratulations Rhonda. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/30/2012 3:04:00 AM
sentimentally put!..my hands are tied, so here's a generic sweet cheers to you for a great win... :) huggs and love, rhonda!
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Date: 4/29/2012 10:01:00 PM
thank yu for sharing this beautiful memory, congrats on your win Rhonda
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:38:00 AM
Oh Rhonda!! What a wonderful memory...much like my own...Wonderful write! So bravely done! Well Done sweetie! Congratulations on your win!! big hugs, love ya~deb
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Date: 4/29/2012 6:25:00 AM
wow! great one..congrats on the contest placement............~sashi
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:23:00 PM
Rhonda. yes, you and I thought much the same. The one exception is that my (biological) dad didn't do stuff like that with us. So I only knew of this kind of enjoyment with my own little family. You were lucky to have it when very young. GREAT entry for Frank's contest.
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Date: 4/15/2012 3:11:00 AM
Great poem! I can hardly wait for the summer to arrive! JP
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:08:00 PM
enjoyed reading
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Date: 4/14/2012 5:20:00 PM
Sweet and lovely summer with your loved one Rhonda. - Wish you all the best in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/14/2012 5:16:00 PM
This took painted a lucid picture.I can see it all in motion.You made these memories fresh again.
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