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Our Starry Eyes

You were with me last spring (and you know who you are and what I mean), when time stood still and roses filled the garden in your back yard, imprisoned by that rusty old chain link fence I used to climb, trying to impress you and get your attention, anyway I could… back when your life and mine were a wave of wicked, wild, wonderful and good. Not that it’s all bad now, it’s just that lately I feel as though I’m behind the proverbial plough and you’re so much farther down the road somehow, well beyond the fork, where we said our last goodbyes. And I remember well the snow that fell and summer passed before our starry eyes. © Terrell Martin, 12/10/2024

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Date: 12/11/2024 11:24:00 AM
a poignant and beautifully written poem, terrell...
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Terrell Martin
Date: 12/11/2024 3:21:00 PM
Hello Ilene and thanks for stopping by once again. I definitely owe you a look-see as well and I'm headed your way shortly to see what poetic beauty you've created lately. Glad you approve of "Starry Eyes" & many thanks again.

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