Our Souls Would Weep

I would hold you in my arms each night,to make you feel better Intertwined two bodies of naked flesh a mixture of body parts never being able to distinguish one from another Seeing only two heads held closely together my lips kiss your head my finger tips stroke your brow Our souls' possess each others body as our being's hold each others tight allowing our hearts to beat as one A peace is felt as all else melts away One could not exist without the other When apart our souls' would weep My lips would lose their softness deprived of kissing yours My voice held hostage absent yours to speak to, as my heart would cease to beat I would fade away into the nothingness, not even a whisper on a breeze to flow through life No words can describe what we share, as none uttered can express these feelings You are my anchor to this life Together we will remain one
9/5/2019 Sponsor:Lu Loo
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Macfarlane Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 1:40 PM
So romantic and beautiful. Congrats on your win. Hugs
Chiri Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 2:49 PM
Cecilia thank you so much!;)
Hamilton Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 11:40 AM
Another beautifully romantic write Brenda, congrats on another win!
Chiri Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:04 PM
Thanks so much John much appreciated!;)
Carber Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Kinda hot, Brenda! I especially liked the 5th stanza--congrats on your win.
Chiri Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:04 PM
Lol well thank you!;)
Scars Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:34 AM
you are silly for ever thinking less of yourself. You resonate a muse so powerful it bleeds of romance and love. You are truly a gifted poetess dear BB...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
Chiri Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:03 PM
Ah Laura thank you so much! You are an ego bust! Appreciate it!;)
Ibeh Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Big congrats on your win, Brenda:-) Remarkable write!
Chiri Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 12:23 AM
Edward thanks so much!;)
Agustin Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Wow! Congrats.... Thanks for sharing your poetic talent. God bless you.
Chiri Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 12:23 AM
Beata thank you so much!;)
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 6:15 PM
congratulations on your top win :)
Chiri Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 12:23 AM
Thank you Sandy you have always been so kind!;)
Green Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Congrats on your win too Brenda.
Chiri Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 12:23 AM
Thank so much Chris!;)
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November 2, 2019 at 6:50 AM
This such a gorgeous poem, Brenda. It takes one breath away w/it's ethereal emotions conveyed on satin thoughts of pure ecstasy. This is very intimate poetry of high Fahrenheit degree. An instant fave from your talented pen. Love and joy always.
Chiri Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Freddie lol thank you so much! I have always enjoyed your comments! And your suggestions on music I might add! Thank you so much for your visits they always lift ones heart with the warmth they bring!;)
Adams Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 7:23 AM
This is gorgeous a true romance of soul mates journey and the way one would fade without the other. Enjoyed this one ... great penning :) hugs
Chiri Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 11:27 AM
Ah sandy thank you so very much! If only I could find a love like that in life would be grand but still I wait lol! Your comments are so appreciated!;)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 7:49 AM
This sounds like the perfect addiction.
Chiri Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 8:49 AM
Indeed it does!;) thanks so much for the reads!;)
Goff Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Very powerful Brenda! jimbo
Chiri Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 6:43 AM
Jumbo thank you so much!;)
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 1:11 PM
A very romantic piece Brenda, you write these so well. Tom.
Chiri Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Thank you Tom I really appreciate your warm comments! You are far too kind!;)
Mcgee Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 11:35 AM
A beautiful love story.
Chiri Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:52 PM
Jeanne thank you so much!;)
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