OUR PLACE OUR SPACE


Oh awesome, sweet garden, how happy you make me,
When I have breakfast on our patio and absorb you with glee,	
Mid-morning comes in a flash with a fleeting cup of coffee,
Then lunch, have a quick sandwich amidst the glory,
And aroma of jasmine and basil and lavender galore,
Roses of any and every color you could imagine and more,
Sunflowers, Geckos and pretty butterflies beckon me,
To tea for two and two for tea, my mothers favorite song,
Sung by Doris Day, a century ago, 
But still have a few phone calls to make, the day has been long.
Finally, dinner under a full moon, the rosemary smells
Divine, our own mint in a jug of water, with lemon 
Kindly supplied, need they know, by two trees in our estate 
 followed by hubby pouring the wine,
As we chill out and dine, 
On a delicious kleftiko meal.
Replete, say goodnight to my garden, small and romantic
And so delightfully aromatic,
What a breathtaking tranquil sight, our place, our space.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Smith Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 11:41 AM
This poem should be read out in every parliament and given to every developer to recite. And just maybe they will make less of a hash of their jobs and finally understand their role in space management here on earth. My new favorite. Thanks some much. Your poet friend in NZ
Ricci Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 3:44 AM
Good Morning Jennifer. Hi. Where do I begin. Your title is marvelous never did you stray and yes what a great poetic touch to end the entry with the title. I love that poetic element. Your theme is ever poetic as are your chosen words. I read it out loud and turned of any noise and volumes. Read back your entry and you will see the worth including imagery and emotion. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace Blessings and more always. (smile)
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Ahh!!! Homey and romantic in one poem. I am glad I chose this one to read today. Your visit to my page was uplifting..Sara K
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 8:10 PM
Sounds like the Garden of Eden... and occasionally the 'Garden of Eatin.' Enjoy, Jennifer!
Ball Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 4:52 PM
Ooooooo! Sounds like Heaven on Earth. I love my back yard because I have turned it into a garden. Hollyhocks, Roses, Lilacs and many different wildflowers to attract butterflies and bees. It is my happy place. Well done here, God Bless, JB
George Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 9:18 PM
I can so well relate as I too have a small beautiful garden. Now here, in Kerala, it is the ideal season for plants..... sunny and cool with no blistering heat. This is the time when flowers bloom in plenty. My adeniums and roses are a sight now. As you say, I too enjoy having my morning coffee in my patio looking at my garden. Jenny, as you feel we all need our own space. Thanks for sharing the joy you derive from your garden, dear friend.
Babcock Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 10:05 AM
I love my garden and my swing and this takes me back to summer days. A delightful poem. love phyl
Bowring Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Such a lovely poem Jennifer which draws the reader into your garden with you as it’s captivating with your delightful, descriptive imagery. So much to enjoy with sights, sounds and aroma’s as well. Pleasure reading. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
One Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 11:42 AM
I love my garden, although its a bit neglected recently... I can see your love for your garden and your personal space, which everyone deserves...always great to read a poem from you as you are such a great writer.. Hope all is well with you..
Cunningham Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 2:01 AM
Sounds a delightful evening Jennifer. Bon Appetit. Tom
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