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Our New House

Our new house is not the earth, No, it’s much bigger than that, Our home is our galaxy, This allows the earth to be protected, Our house, is a big house, Too big to be visited overnight, Too big for our knowledge, But we’ll probably explore it, Our home is our galaxy, the Milky Way, That protects us from invasions, icy winters, That protects us from wars, empires, This galaxy has its own time, She’s been hiding us for billions of years.

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David Fisher

Date: 8/20/2023 11:21:00 AM

Awesome poem about our house and protector. Very interesting and enjoyable view of things.

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/20/2023 5:09:00 PM

thank you so much David

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/19/2023 7:19:00 AM

Why it's a new house ? It's the prime shelter of all of us. Welcome to Poetry soup. Blessings

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/20/2023 5:09:00 PM

You're right Anisha, thank you

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 8/18/2023 1:31:00 PM

I do agree, Yann. Very nice penning. Love your deep message, which I hope one day protect us from all the misseries on Earth. Well done, my friend. Have a lovely weekend!

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/18/2023 11:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Maria

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 8/18/2023 4:27:00 AM

lovely write

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/18/2023 11:18:00 PM

thanks .yolanda, for reading

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2023 3:19:00 PM

It will be cool to understand all the galaxies one day. Cool poem

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2023 6:34:00 PM

thanks andrea, appreciate your "cool comment"

Valsa George

Date: 8/17/2023 5:21:00 AM

Yes, our home is not so small but much bigger. In a way the entire universe is our home and each one us is part of it. Beautiful poem, Yaan !

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2023 6:35:00 PM

thanks Valsa for the beautiful comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2023 1:34:00 AM

- Sounds like a wonderful place to live...considering moving (even though I have a new home :) - I enjoy this writing, Yann :) - hugs

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2023 6:35:00 PM

Thanks Anne lise, there is such a long way before

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/16/2023 8:14:00 PM

and what a lovely galaxy it is dear poet, well written thank you Yann

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2023 6:36:00 PM

Thanks Rose, appreciate your lovely comment

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/16/2023 3:25:00 PM

We can only stay hidden for so long before someone comes knocking. I often wonder if the first contact from another world will be a friend or an enemy.

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2023 6:37:00 PM

Thanks a lot Jerry, we will see it some day, i guess

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2023 3:04:00 PM

It seems that the universe and the galaxies of such have grown smaller since I was a child because we are exposed to so much today. Thanks for sharing your ideas in this one. I enjoyed reading it. Your visit to my page added a different dimension to my work. Sara

Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2023 6:38:00 PM

thanks sara, your visits are so appreciated, take care