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Our Music

Our notes linger in the air
Long after the music ends
The song we sing so rare
Sweet  harmony that blends

Long after the music ends
Our melody lingers in the air
Sweet harmony that blends
Two lives that now we share

Our melody lingers in the air
The song we sing so rare
Two lives that we now share
Our notes linger in the air


For the dreaded Pantoum contest...

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2010

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Kris Walters Date: 9/3/2010 9:52:00 AM Ah! Nicely done! Pantoums are difficult to write yet you have done it well! Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, kris Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/3/2010 4:15:00 AM Good luck in the contest with this excellent write that should be in the winners' circle..Enjoyed reading your work..Great topic that you have chosen on which to write.Sara Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 9/2/2010 7:42:00 AM now you got me intrested. john Login to Reply

David Smalling Date: 9/1/2010 12:03:00 PM Thanks for reading my poems. I love your comments, but enjoy reading your poem more ... I feel the haunting of romance here too. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/31/2010 6:05:00 PM Dear LNC, I love your pantoum. Wish we could all feel that our melody would linger in the air because we have found mates. It was a challenge writing a pantoum, but you came through in style! Great work, Barbara! Love, Carolyn (still laughing at your note at the end) Login to Reply

Sarah Hales Date: 8/31/2010 3:35:00 PM great write ,,,,, Thank you my friend for your kind remarks .....xx sarah xx Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/31/2010 5:44:00 AM great write!! you did so fine on the pantoum! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 8/30/2010 8:33:00 PM Doesn't Harry send the most wonderful commets!! Anyways, he is not wrong, this pantoum is lovely, a sure winner~ Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 8/30/2010 8:30:00 PM Dear Barbara, may I bring YOUR attention to the Winners Circle, where stands the POETESS Barbara Jean a Laurel Wreath upon Her head a Bouquet of Roses in her hand a POETIC Work of Art I bow to YOUR Excellence LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG Login to Reply