Barbara Gorelick Poet Pantoum

Our Music

Our notes linger in the air
Long after the music ends
The song we sing so rare
Sweet  harmony that blends

Long after the music ends
Our melody lingers in the air
Sweet harmony that blends
Two lives that now we share

Our melody lingers in the air
The song we sing so rare
Two lives that we now share
Our notes linger in the air


For the dreaded Pantoum contest...

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Kris Walters September 3, 2010 at 9:52 AM Ah! Nicely done! Pantoums are difficult to write yet you have done it well! Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, kris

Sara Kendrick September 3, 2010 at 4:15 AM Good luck in the contest with this excellent write that should be in the winners' circle..Enjoyed reading your work..Great topic that you have chosen on which to write.Sara

John Loving Iii September 2, 2010 at 7:42 AM now you got me intrested. john

David Smalling September 1, 2010 at 12:03 PM Thanks for reading my poems. I love your comments, but enjoy reading your poem more ... I feel the haunting of romance here too.

Carolyn Devonshire August 31, 2010 at 6:05 PM Dear LNC, I love your pantoum. Wish we could all feel that our melody would linger in the air because we have found mates. It was a challenge writing a pantoum, but you came through in style! Great work, Barbara! Love, Carolyn (still laughing at your note at the end)

Sarah Hales August 31, 2010 at 3:35 PM great write ,,,,, Thank you my friend for your kind remarks .....xx sarah xx

Doris Culverhouse August 31, 2010 at 5:44 AM great write!! you did so fine on the pantoum!

Constance La France August 30, 2010 at 8:33 PM Doesn't Harry send the most wonderful commets!! Anyways, he is not wrong, this pantoum is lovely, a sure winner~

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire August 30, 2010 at 8:30 PM Dear Barbara, may I bring YOUR attention to the Winners Circle, where stands the POETESS Barbara Jean a Laurel Wreath upon Her head a Bouquet of Roses in her hand a POETIC Work of Art I bow to YOUR Excellence LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG