Our Love Is Right

OUR LOVE IS RIGHT


Now that I've found you, I'll not let you go
Life was going nowhere, with you it just flows
Times we spend heals my empty-bleeding heart
I'll never allow a day, for you to ever depart


Darling, your love place me on my fire 
Hearing you speak, I don't get tired
Since I've known you, I get wired 
Tell me when can I hold you tight 
Tell me when can I hug your might 
Tell me when can I kiss your light?
Tell me, darling, our love is right...


Feelings of missing you doesn't color blue
Instead it brushed hues of paradise view
It pleasures me, I hymn our united theme
I, a songbird, lured ears to stop and hear


Each time you close those bright eyes 
I am struck to behold with guise 
You must know I don't disguise
Tell me when can I hold you tight 
Tell me when can I hug your might 
Tell me when can I kiss your light?
Tell me, darling, our love is right...


Gazing at you, I see a vista of life
winsome smile melting all my strife 
Hearing you, my heart leaps so tall
Like Autumn leaves, am ready to fall


Barriers broken  as hearts and lips talk
To ocean of motions we take each walk
True love flowered, said by our own folks
Tell me when can I hold you tight 
Tell me when can I hug your might 
Tell me when can I kiss your light?
Tell me, darling, our love is right..
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5:31pm, December 25, 2015

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White Sage

Date: 1/21/2016 6:35:00 PM

lovely words there Olive...excellent write

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/7/2016 4:59:00 PM

This is so beautiful my dear very deep and touchy , u captured me with this these mesmerizing words , hugs / / :) dalia

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 3:53:00 AM

thanks much, im happy you like it.. hugs back!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2015 11:09:00 PM

Hi Olly Olive, I'd never close the year on poetry soup, without saying thank you to all the poets on my favorite list. Wishing you the best this coming year **2016** Happy New Year... Always & Forever ~LINDA~

James Fraser

Date: 12/26/2015 6:33:00 AM

Big hugs little one for arranging our poems we scribed whilst chatting all those months. Love firing these lines at each other, and more than likely we come up with a poem, or even a theme to further write about. x I thank Father God for introducing us on the fine Poetry Site x soon 2016 to write more in person, love, your Huge One ~XX~James~XX

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/27/2015 7:37:00 PM

James, I am just happy to weave them in one!!! =`) Yes i love our taunting strikes anytime.. =`) What more if we do it on spot soon!!! I will always be grateful to God.. =`)hugs back... =`) Your little one, OLive ELoisa =`)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 9:29:00 PM

So sweet, OLIVE Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/27/2015 7:44:00 PM

Lollie Linda, we have times like that, don't worry the ones you did outshine the resting moments you have here.. =`) Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.. =`) Happiness and good Health!!!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2015 2:11:00 PM

Great collaboration..Way to go ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/27/2015 7:42:00 PM

Thanks much Sara.. I always enjoyed stopping by to your page.. =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/25/2015 12:57:00 PM

Well done Olive & James!! Very romantic....all we need now is the music:) Did both of you enter it for the contest, or just one? Still not sure of the rules. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/27/2015 7:35:00 PM

I was the one who entered Paul.. =`) thank you so much! I read your entry too with EM and I am very impressed.. =`) This some of the lines me and James shared during our chats.. =`) hugs back!~Olive Eloisa =`)