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Our Love Is Eternal

Our soul's luminous light filters the depth of darkness shining like a woven thread into the stillness of time It was there where we met, in a universe long forgotten where we merged wrapped in the twilight of breaking dawn We've known love in worlds that have passed before we cried out for a new birth where our spirits rolled like thunder needing to be heard You are the emptiness I feel until we meet...in every journey when we cross the arc of time once again Somewhere when our lips finally meet and the rush of this new world stops It's there trapped in the fragrance Love will be forever warm To drift in a dream, where our hearts flutter and love's face glows, in all its colors To float away with life's night where our souls capture love's fire holding its flame gently To feel the velvet petals of passion's flower where the fragrance wafts from blooms caressing our yearnings with the sweet scent of intoxication As our hearts merge in glorious freedom leaving this world without a care slowing the flight of hummingbirds when we whisper a symphony of desire heard by welcome ears until the beautiful dawn splays ever soft across sensual eyes of love leaving us standing over the graves of our hearts as we await another life, in another place and time for our love is eternal and we will meet again 2/23/18 contest Free Verse on Love

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Date: 7/12/2019 11:33:00 PM
This could be the lyrics to the greatest of love classics. What beautiful understanding of the nature of love! My Best to You! Lonna
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Date: 9/9/2018 8:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Frederic. Well penned.
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Date: 3/21/2018 8:28:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations for writing the top poem in the top 100. You are number 1 my friend. It thrills me to see your work recognized, for you truly are a talented writer.
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Date: 3/21/2018 4:24:00 AM
Sweetness extending arms, excepting loves sweet embrace in fragrance of delight. I love this sensual write. thank you for sharing.. Derena(Harriet)
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:30:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:57:00 PM
A masterpiece Frederic, a fave for sure;-)
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Date: 3/6/2018 9:57:00 PM
Frederic, love IS eternal, a beautifully penned poem and your choice of music is outstanding ~
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Date: 3/4/2018 1:35:00 PM
Hello Fredrick, this is a beautiful written poem.The very last line made my eyes teary. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:36:00 PM
Very beautiful!
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Date: 3/3/2018 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations for #1 spot on the best new poem list Frederic :)
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:25:00 PM
Beautiful, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/1/2018 5:18:00 PM
A triple repeat visit Frederic. Returning with congratulations on reaching, I think actually debuting, in the #1 spot on the Best New Poems list with your exquisite, emotional and passionate poem.
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Date: 2/28/2018 3:06:00 PM
Brilliant piece Frederic, congratulations...
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Date: 2/27/2018 7:16:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Frederic for your excellent win in the Free Verse contest with your beautifully profound and emotional poem of eternal love. ~Susan
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Date: 2/27/2018 9:36:00 AM
Marvelous writing Frederic, congrats on another win!
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Date: 2/27/2018 12:05:00 AM
This awesome poem brought tears to my eyes Frederic! I read it while listening to the music which enhanced my feelings. Congratulations on your well deserved first placement my friend. This is going into my faves! I simply adore it! xxoo
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Date: 2/26/2018 5:37:00 AM
well, here you are again with a top placement and yet, I am never surprised to see your name. You write with such ease and romance every time. beautiful and profound sweet Frederic. thank you and congrats : )-luloo
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Date: 2/25/2018 2:22:00 AM
This is so beautiful that it brings tears to my eyes...love never dies...and words fail me except to say it is unforgettable and one of my very FAVORITE poems and the music was perfect. Blessings to you, Frederic.
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Date: 2/24/2018 7:38:00 AM
Oh! I absolutely love this one Frederic ! A favorite. Very well written :)
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Date: 2/23/2018 8:32:00 PM
Frederic, your poem expresses the true love of soul mates with passionate depth and gorgeous imagery of their duet in mortal life and eternal love. Your poem is so captivating and the content is so beautiful. Best wishes for a win. ~Susan
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