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Our Love

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Will our love be like the tide, sweeping changes taking us to distant lands? the beach washed clean daily... Will our love be like the rivers eddy, swirling circles, lazy fish, sparkling sunlight? Will our love be like the falls? Dropping, wearing, damned and released at times? A merry pounding sound with rushing crashing and rocks... Will our love be like the calm still pool, filled again by the rains but green and stagnating at times? Where the bugs and tadpoles breed... Love can be all those things, and each in its time. Just give me this.. Enough to float on, and a steady supply. Don't leave me with thirst to die. our love - 1-28-2005 (C) Artimus Susan Manley

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Date: 9/25/2023 9:48:00 PM
Love comes quickly whatever you do and we never know how love will pan out.. also we need different loves too. I liked this Susan :)
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Date: 9/23/2023 10:36:00 AM
Hopeful and charming
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