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A warm safe place out of the cold, with all you might need to have to hold. Each frame, each shelf, reflects who you are. A moving sculpture of your memoirs. It's walls and floors absorb every voice... each wail or cry, and every time we rejoice. In the still and quiet the dark sighs and the echo of a thousand footsteps go by. And yet ... and yet, If the roof caved in and the walls fell down, in my memories are these same ghostly sounds. It is in the hand my child holds and the stories my husband has told. Our home is so dear to us but always within, our temple of blood and bone and skin.

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Date: 3/6/2025 6:34:00 AM
A very interesting turn dear friend, from home to home within. amazing thought, congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/5/2025 1:59:00 PM
Lovely Cristol. I liked your movement from concrete to abstract. Our bodies indeed are a home, a shelter. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/5/2025 11:40:00 AM
This is sweet and beautiful to the eyes.
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Date: 3/5/2025 1:35:00 AM
What a warm and solid poetry, Crystol. Just like a home should be. Congrats!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/5/2025 11:20:00 AM
Thank you! Xo
Date: 2/22/2025 2:33:00 PM
Hello Cyrstol, The home is where the heart is. A family together under a roof. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/23/2025 3:42:00 PM
Hello Cyrstol, You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/23/2025 12:07:00 PM
Yess, thanks! Xo

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