Our Home Within



                                                   A
                                               warm
                                            safe place
                                        out of the cold,
                                   with  all   you   might 
                                need  to   have   to   hold.
                          Each frame, each shelf, reflects 
                  who you are. A moving sculpture of your 
                 memoirs. It's walls and floors absorb every 
                 voice... each wail or cry, and every time we 
                 rejoice. In the still and quiet the dark sighs
                and the echo of a thousand footsteps go by. 
                And yet ... and yet,  If the roof  caved in and
               the    walls fell down, in my   memories   are   
               these  same ghostly sounds. It is in the hand 
              my child holds  and the  stories my   husband
              has told. Our home is so dear to us but always 
              within,  our temple of blood and bone and skin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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mysore Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:34 AM
A very interesting turn dear friend, from home to home within. amazing thought, congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
Layne Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Lovely Cristol. I liked your movement from concrete to abstract. Our bodies indeed are a home, a shelter. Congratulations!
Famuyiwa Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 11:40 AM
This is sweet and beautiful to the eyes.
Evangeline Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 1:35 AM
What a warm and solid poetry, Crystol. Just like a home should be. Congrats!
Woods Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Thank you! Xo
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 2:33 PM
Hello Cyrstol, The home is where the heart is. A family together under a roof. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Hello Cyrstol, You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Woods Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Yess, thanks! Xo
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