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A naked bleakness dressed with sparkling stars, Dance sweetly taffaria fairies wands, Auburn burnish Terra foundation scars, Strewn light rods frock poise for their eager bonds. Savor sparked light, plated of painted blends, Generous crops hatched for harvesters pluck, Heap hued leaves for dives of little friends, Grand to behold as worn eyes are awed struck. As the sinking filters down to deaths floor, Achromatic crystals shroud their being, Neath browns fertile soil rebirth of its core, Hibernates for pardoned Spring, their freeing. Limelight a year; birth, life, dying and death, Mirror fleeting truth and our fragile breath. *taffaria; Fairies' wings are made of a special material called taffaria. This ultra-strong, silky and transparent material is clear at first glance but has all 7 colors of the rainbow in it. Red, purple, yellow, pink, blue, green, and orange. 2019 November 04 RhymeZone PS Grammar Checker Howmanysyllables; 14 lines x 10 syllables - 140 syllables total

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Date: 11/4/2019 7:52:00 AM
Wow. Lovely. Ann
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Hilo Poet
Date: 11/5/2019 12:47:00 AM
Thanks for your kindness ~ Aloha always William
Date: 11/4/2019 7:52:00 AM
Wow this was awesome. loved the descriptions
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Date: 11/4/2019 2:38:00 PM
You have my grateful appreciation ~ Aloha always William

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