Our First Kiss

All these dark and secret places 
only I have known and explored. 
The hidden other-world
 of lips and teeth and tongue. 
Mine alone for these many years. 
The tastes, both bitter and sweet. 

The feel of my mouth, the sensitive swollen softness 
of my bottom lip between a gentle bite.
 I scrape it along my teeth. 
Hidden in plain sight, 
a constant awareness in the back of my mind. 
So busy, in motion, often habitual. 

Then two worlds meet…

I taste your lips, their texture and shape. 
Flashes of lightning track 
from the tip of your pink tongue
 through my core.
 I am aware of my womb
 for the only time it has known pleasure instead of pain 
as a sweet tension and ache begins there.  
A million nerves come alive
 as the muscle in my mouth twists and licks, 
getting to know your smile from behind your teeth. 
We dance in this inner world, 
the most intimate communication I've ever known. 
How very strange it is to desire someone else's spit!
 I shake my baffled head at this but, yes,
 let me sip at that sweet nectar 
like a little hummingbird…
as I hummmm…
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Charles Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 12:05 AM
I love reading poetry and I love writing poetry, but even more than this, I love to feel it. My vocabulary isn't vast and I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed so I rely on my feelings and for me, poetry is feeling. This was beautifully penned, but even more, I could really feel it!
Woods Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 4:04 AM
That's one of the best compliments I've ever had, thank you! I feel the same way...I often have to look up definitions of words i read and that is one form of talent, to be able to write with such an array of knowledge and vocabulary. But you're right, to feel the emotion in a poem is another talent. Thank you for commenting! Xo
Rodgers Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Dear Crystol, I just read your poem, and wow, it took my breath away! Literally! Oh' the intimacy of that first kiss is so beautifully raw, real and funny. I could feel every sensation you described with the sweetness, the tension, the strange joy of connection. How transformative those moments can be. Keep writing your incredible truths—they're a gift to everyone who reads them. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 11:47 AM
How incredibly sweet! I am humbled by your words... and so happy you were able to experience this poem as you've described! Thank you thank you thank you!! Xoxo
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 2:45 PM
A first kiss can evoke all sorts of real and surreal sensations to mess with our minds Crystol, you take it to a another level here, I agree with Anaya (Clinically charming) yet beautifully captured and expressed, cheers David
Woods Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 5:57 AM
Thank you David! Xo
Anaya Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 2:18 PM
Clinically charming, Crystol. Clear and concisely details that which we can all appreciate by far. xoxo's
Woods Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 5:57 AM
Just trying to express that hidden world of the insides of our mouths that one can kind of share with a kiss... I'm proud you appreciate the details! Thanks for stopping by! Xo
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