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Our First Glance

Poetic rapture, innate melody synchronistically manifested... 6th place in the "First Love" contest by Linda-Marie Bariana. First love, met 20 years ago. Married 10 years happily to this day. A. Green

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Mac Mcgovern

Date: 5/14/2010 1:18:00 PM

My equation of marriage to poetry. This after 32 magnificent years. Poetry is the absolute beauty of the human heart expressing emotion in a form that delights and leaves the reader with a feeling of contentment in one spectrum and a feeling of remorse in another. No other form of writing has the ability and power to inspire emotion than created through poetry. Another example on how many great ways love can be expressed.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/30/2010 3:47:00 PM

Very nice, my friend! 6th Place! Did you get my e-mail requesting a collaboration? ...your friend, Jimmy

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/29/2010 6:58:00 AM

Strange as it may sound, my first love and I are like brother and sister to this day. Her two brothers and I played basketball together in high school, and I was always at their home, so somehow I remained friends with her and not her brothers over the years. We have both been married and divorced to cheating spouses. I made it 19 years and she made it 21. Congratulations on 20 years, that is a wonderful thing!

Destiny Orschell

Date: 4/25/2010 12:03:00 PM

Congradulations!!! And I LOVE the strong vocabulary you used. -Destiny

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/24/2010 4:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Amy. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/24/2010 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations not only on your win, but also on your 20 years of wedded bliss, Amy! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2010 8:58:00 PM

wow, very well said, Congratulations, Amy!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/23/2010 7:45:00 PM

Ah, the first love we never forget! Congratulations on your win..Enjoy!! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 5:10:00 PM

Congrats Amy on your success in my "First Love" contest with this expressive Epigram..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 11:51:00 PM

Wow! Your first love endures, Amy! Congratulations on being one of the few. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 11:22:00 PM

Wonderfully expression. Good luck

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/22/2010 7:58:00 PM

Amy~ Wow this is great and he was your first love AWE your a lucky happy girl! Great entry! Laura :)