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OUR FIGHT



Clouds of doubt hovered 
Over our heads 
They multiplied and grew to 
Mistrust 
That brewed to a storm of anger which 
Unleashed its rage in
Thunder of words and 
Lightning of gestures           


In a while
The exhausted tempest subsided 
Clouds dissipated 
The sun of trust hesitantly appeared
It grew stronger and brighter, 
Reason prevailed,
Feelings warmed up,
Harts palpitated, 
Arms opened wide
And
We threw ourselves into
Each others embrace 
Finding thus shelter in 
Our love

Hence

Fearing the coming of a  
New storm, NO MORE!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
  08 OCTOBER 2014
  
 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/13/2014 7:28:00 AM
Just found this my friend. Big congrats on your fine write being chosen for POTD.
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Date: 10/13/2014 7:43:00 AM
Thank you, Robert! Better late than never, as they say! Very kind of you!
Date: 10/12/2014 8:26:00 PM
Belated Congratulations on your piece being the poem of the day.
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Date: 10/13/2014 6:56:00 AM
Merci, Maurice! It doesn't matter at all! Thank you, very kind of you!
Date: 10/10/2014 10:57:00 PM
Incredible imagery using the contrast of storm to sunny day.. I love it. Congrats on your well deserved poem of the day!
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Date: 10/11/2014 1:19:00 AM
Very gracious your visit and comment, Lyric Man, It's truly appreciated. Thank you!
Date: 10/10/2014 2:26:00 PM
cool!
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 10/10/2014 1:31:00 PM
- A good choice poem of the day - Congrats, my friend Demetrios ! // A-L
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Date: 10/10/2014 1:47:00 PM
Thank you my dear, Anne Lise, you so gracious!
Date: 10/10/2014 8:33:00 AM
touching all senses dear pal beautifully penned i tip my hat your way well done
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Date: 10/10/2014 9:42:00 AM
Thank you my good Irish friend, Liam, for your kind words!
Date: 10/10/2014 7:35:00 AM
Demetrious, congratulations on being chosen as poem of the day. Verlena
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Verlena for your kind gesture!
Date: 10/10/2014 2:29:00 AM
incredibly powerful imagery of weather and stormy relationships - fabulous write many congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/10/2014 9:04:00 AM
I think it should be mailed to everyone on the site Demetrios it will make people more aware of the poem and the fact this honour is there:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Jan, for your visit and for being the bearer of the good news about the poem of the day! I didn't know anything. I thing they should advise the honored poets by e-mail. Thank you for the great comment as well. I appreciate it!
Date: 10/10/2014 1:55:00 AM
Congrats on POD....Tim
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, Tim, for the congratulations on being the POD poet!
Date: 10/9/2014 12:26:00 PM
- No love storm here ...... but, a real autumn storm with much wind and thunder - A proper autumn day as powerfully as in your great poem, dear friend Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 12:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne Lise, for your visit and great comment!
Date: 10/9/2014 2:09:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 10/9/2014 5:24:00 AM
Ravi, my friend, how wonderful to receive your visit and comment it is. Thank you!
Date: 10/8/2014 7:09:00 PM
Growing up with my friends we did something we called "slander Sunday". Every Sunday you could get off you chest anything you like about one of your friends and nothing would be held against you...Today these guys are still near and dear to me...we are like brothers and nothing gets to any of us...we all have an even temperament...cheers
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Date: 10/9/2014 5:25:00 AM
Thank you for the story, Tim!
Date: 10/8/2014 3:51:00 PM
Demetrios, there is a William Blake poem "A Poison Tree." In it, he says when he quarrels with a friend, they talk it out and everything is better. But when he quarrels with a foe, his anger only grows from lack of communication. The wisdom in your poem reminded me of this classic. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2014 4:25:00 PM
I will check it, dear Carolyn! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment. I much appreciate it!
Date: 10/8/2014 1:12:00 PM
Another beautiful write my friend.
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:16:00 PM
Another beautiful visit from you my friend, Maurice! Merci!
Date: 10/8/2014 8:16:00 AM
This is such a loving n humble write Demetrios! I m touched! Great work!
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Date: 10/8/2014 11:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma, for your kind visit and your heartfelt comment!
Date: 10/8/2014 4:23:00 AM
My dear poet....You write to beautifully. I'm touched by every word of this tender and truthful write. Me agapi
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Date: 10/8/2014 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen, you are always gracious and kind!
Date: 10/8/2014 3:25:00 AM
Demetrios . . . Das ist ganz wunderbar mein guter freund und ist ein hervorragendes Gedicht!! Ich habe dieses Gedicht sehr schoen gefunden sein!! Enjoyed it immensely -- and it is an immense "7" as well. My continued best wishes, Gary.
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Date: 10/8/2014 5:20:00 AM
Danke. aber, mein gutter freund, wir mussen auch etwas auf English schreiben!Ha-ha! Thank you so much my good friend, Gary, your appreciation makes me very happy!