Our Fantasy

Thoughts read, fridge raided Opposite me with a wink She smiles with a twist Sultry spooning her wet lips Mint Ice Cream kisses adorn .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Wow! my dear friend James that's so sweet and romantic! lol...I love it the way you composed this tanka. A 7 from me! Have a great evening over there! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Fraser Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Dorian, thank you dearest friend. Your comments on my humble writes make me smile, for that I thank you. Have a lovely weekend, James/hugs xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:26 AM
hahahahahahahahahahahaha that's all plus wink!
Fraser Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Thank you Olive, I'll need to have a word with my imagination, haha. Cheers for the wink! - James :P
Chircop Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 7:31 PM
A flavoured tanka with edible dreams..Yum!
Fraser Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Yummy indeed Charmaine. Have a most lovely weekend - James :)xx
Allison Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 1:50 PM
mmmm a tasty little tanka treat James:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Our Fantasy 2 ;-)
Allison Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 2:18 PM
where do u put the flake and choc sauce?
Fraser Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 1:59 PM
Mmm, and I so love Mint Ice Cream, James ;-) xx
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