Paula Swanson Poet Senryu

Our Eyes Knew the Truth

A Heart beat in time
two old souls rekindle love
our eyes knew the truth

Seeing deep within
transcending beyond the now
to past and future

The electric spark 
the elemental nature
of love at first sight


Written by Paula Swanson

For the contest, Eyes First Meet
Placement: 9th

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 5:40 AM Congratulations on your win Paula in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts April 3, 2011 at 7:35 PM lovely entry Paula, congrats on your win in the contest

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2011 at 2:14 PM I just love yours, not sure I had seen it before. GREAT line: the elemental nature of love at first sight. Congratulations,Paula.

Wilma Neels April 2, 2011 at 12:31 PM Paula congratulations on your win in Michael's contest :)

Kash Poet April 2, 2011 at 7:17 AM Congratulations Paula on your well deserved win--kashinath

Elaine George April 2, 2011 at 2:05 AM Absolutely perfect rendering of first love, in a perfect string Senryu, Paula. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Harry Horsman April 2, 2011 at 1:54 AM these are awesome, Paula. congrats. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 2, 2011 at 12:27 AM Gotta love it when that happens, how wonderful for that old flame to be rekindled-- Super congrats on your win, Paula :)

Tahera Mannan April 1, 2011 at 9:45 PM Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Paula.

Joyce Johnson April 1, 2011 at 6:14 PM Very nice Paula. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2011 at 4:23 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2011 at 3:23 PM Congratulations on the ninthn place win in the contest of Michael, Paula

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2011 at 3:20 PM congrats for the great win, paula.. :) hugggs

Audrey Haick April 1, 2011 at 3:15 PM Congratulations on you 9th Place Win in Michael's Contest, Paula. Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2011 at 2:46 PM Wow, I really like the way the spark is reignited when the two "old souls" meet again. Very nice, Paula. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2011 at 2:33 PM Congrats Paula on your wonderful winning poem in Michael's cool contest with this exciting entry my friend.. wonderful to share the winners list with u in this contest .. enjoy with luv.. happy weekend too.

Michael J. Falotico April 1, 2011 at 2:31 PM Congrats Paula on your win in my contest..luv Michael