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Our Eternal Soul

Our Eternal Soul Who knows of your eternal soul Few left behind With only brevity of time Soul of life and meaning Existing collection of our being Voyage of forever seeking Fugitive to place or time Soul wanders endlessly Vines inept to climb Shapeless entity form I am the soul of this soul Origin of mental storms O dear soul, you enrage and offend Pretense of immortality Wrestling your chaotic wend O precious soul without vision Poverty of purpose and wisdom Eulogy your final collision

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Date: 2/12/2018 1:49:00 PM
What an amazing poem! Good clichés, nice balanced topic, while being wild and open with the happenings... Good writing Levi Johnson
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Date: 12/16/2017 9:06:00 PM
Such precious ramblings.. A bit chaotic and but covering the vacancy, such is much needed it seems. O my, expand your pretense and searching for purpose, could be a worthy goal. THANKS FOR YOUR RECENT COMMENT ON MY POEM.
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Date: 10/29/2016 5:51:00 PM
A good read. Nicely expressed.
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