Our Eternal Love

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I fall into his deep brown eyes my heart lost, my soul smitten our love is an ocean going on forever and evermore A mere touch of his fingertips leaves me breathless and throbbing our love is spiritual his kisses are so heavenly I twine my hands in his hair and trace his handsome face our love is a fine wine to sip slowly with growing passion He is my everything, I love him With an aching need hypnotic our love needs no words laying side by side for hours, gazing ___________________ September 11, 2017 Free Verse/Our Eternal Love Copyright Protected, ID 938776

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/14/2017 5:04:00 PM

so beautifully romantic Constance and i love the picture you chose:-) hugs jan xx

John Hamilton

Date: 9/11/2017 10:11:00 AM

Wonderfully romantic, very sincere and loving poem Constance, should do well in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/11/2017 8:57:00 AM

Very sweet!

Emma Sivey

Date: 9/11/2017 5:59:00 AM

This is a sweet poem. I really like it. It reminds me of when my husband and I dance in our bedroom...alone, if you get my drift, lol. Lovely. Emma :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2017 5:30:00 AM

Wow...Wow! This is an incredibly erotic write, with essentially a loving passion to no end! I am filled with down to Earth ecstasy, a loving desire to be with my love and dance with her lit the days of old are dying again! Never do they die! What a glorious poem my friend Constance! You have delighted me yet again with such a masterful poem! Great Work!!