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Our Eternal Love

I fall into his deep brown eyes
my heart lost, my soul smitten
our love is an ocean
going on forever and evermore

A mere touch of his fingertips
leaves me breathless and throbbing
our love is spiritual
his kisses are so heavenly

I twine my hands in his hair
and trace his handsome face
our love is a fine wine 
to sip slowly with growing passion

He is my everything, I love him
With an aching need hypnotic
our love needs no words
laying side by side for hours, gazing

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September 11, 2017


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Allison Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 5:04 PM
so beautifully romantic Constance and i love the picture you chose:-) hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Wonderfully romantic, very sincere and loving poem Constance, should do well in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Very sweet!
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 5:59 AM
This is a sweet poem. I really like it. It reminds me of when my husband and I dance in our bedroom...alone, if you get my drift, lol. Lovely. Emma :)
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 5:30 AM
Wow...Wow! This is an incredibly erotic write, with essentially a loving passion to no end! I am filled with down to Earth ecstasy, a loving desire to be with my love and dance with her lit the days of old are dying again! Never do they die! What a glorious poem my friend Constance! You have delighted me yet again with such a masterful poem! Great Work!!
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