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butterflies of imagination, will o' the wisp,forgotten,die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/29/2010 2:28:00 PM
Old line is line number two one that I had almost forgotten...Sara
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Date: 3/29/2010 7:54:00 AM
Oh yes...this is the most perfect crystalline I've seen....so much said so beautifully, in two lines. Fleeting moment in time....Nicely done!!
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Date: 3/29/2010 5:56:00 AM
But while they are alive they are so beautiful and colorful ..with rainbow like qualities.. excellent Crystalline poetry today Brian..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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