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*Image of Bread Our Daily Dough Pixabay. Our Daily Bread The rooster neck stretched while crowing wakes unknowing rubbing their eyes mid-raised gold skies. The fields being harvested all-day work and no pay hourly naught here own free and clear. Morning, noon, till the setting sun mom's work ne'er done our meed we're awed by Father God. 2021 July 24 *2nd Place* 12 Lines In Rhyme ~~Joseph May: Judged 2021 July 26

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2021 4:15:00 PM

Congrats on your second place. Well deserved, poet.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2021 4:34:00 PM

I am grateful, Andrea, for I found this to be a challenging form, Aloha!

Constance La France

Date: 7/28/2021 7:43:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win and so true your line "mom's work ne'er done" and I love the smell of baking bread ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2021 10:22:00 AM

The country village baker, mom buys a couple of loaves before heading to our grands', but first, freshly baked slices, butter, hot eagles cocoa, eggs & bacon -- memories, Constance, have yourself such a day as that ..., Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2021 5:28:00 AM

You created a great scene and that bread looks scrumptious! Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2021 5:55:00 AM

I heartily agree, Kim, with thanksgiving, Aloha!

Joseph May

Date: 7/26/2021 10:24:00 AM

So true William, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win..

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2021 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph, for the wondrous opportunity my friend, Aloha!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/26/2021 10:19:00 AM

Hi William, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2021 10:21:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis, and may the same be yours too, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/26/2021 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations William on your win. Your words give dignity to the work of our hands - the bread of life showing each of us is needed and each of us is necessary in God's plan and the Father's heart! This is a blessing! Aloha my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2021 10:20:00 AM

Well said Sam, your breath of words gives a worthy lesson of our Creator's blessing true intentions my friend, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/26/2021 10:09:00 AM

Our need we're awed, by Father God - Words full of trust. Congratulations on your win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2021 10:12:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj, for your highlighted point my friend, Aloha!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/26/2021 8:13:00 AM

A fab fine poem it seems in thankful gratitude and appreciation of mothers and God the father. Kudos!! ------~~~~~~^^^^^^^^------ Plz also do read and comment my newest poem .

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2021 10:07:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your views, Aloha!