Premiere Contest WinnerOur Caves


Our hearts have chambers, four in all;
   like caves, they are defined and seen.
But there are hidden caves within
   where our emotions live between.

The Cave of Love, the largest one,
   is filled, but sometimes shuts its door.
Much better to keep it ajar
   so give and take can flow, restore.

And next to it, the Cave of Faith;
   it feeds our hearts with gifts of trust
in God, our Earth and those we love;
   and also in ourselves, a must.

Along with Faith, the Cave of Hope
   puts sunshine in our hearts so bright, 
that lifts us up no matter what,
   through sunny days or dark of night.

The Cave of Service in our heart
   is filled with help to fellowman;
must keep its contents flowing out...
   a part of our survival plan.

At last, the Cave of Thankfulness
   provides an echo loud and strong.
Our hearts get fuller with the joy
   when gratefulness sings its sweet song.

Heart chambers hold the beat and flow
   that keep our bodies so alive.
But unseen caves where "heartfelt" lives,
   our magic inner selves survive.


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Premiere Contest: 2019 Marathon Mile 16
Sponsor: Mark Toney
Judged: 02/05/2019

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: Caves
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Judged: 08/07/2016
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Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 12:23 AM
Bravo, Sandra. Congrats on your top win.
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Carber Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 4:29 PM
What a brilliant simile! wow, wow, wow! I don't think the notion of 'the human heart' has ever, in the non-medical sense, been delineated so well--congrats on your win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Thank you very much for your visit, L.J. and for your congrats and very uplifting comments! They are very much appreciated. Sandra :)
Toney Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Sandra, this is a very clever and creative write! A Fav for me. Congratulations on your second-place win on Mile 16 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Thank you so much, Mark! I am very pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate the Fav in addition to my nice placement! On to the next mile! Sandra :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:26 PM
Wow, I love exploring these "caves" with you, Sandra. Your heart is filled with compassion, faith and love. A stunning write! Congratulations on your big win! Hugs, carolyn
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, Carolyn, for your lovely, uplifting comments and congrats. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Watson Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Many congratulations,Sandra, Such a meaningful, well expressed poem. Congratulations on your continued success in the marathon!
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy! I appreciate your visit, congrats, and lovely comments. It is so nice to see you on these marathon winner's lists too, and best wishes for the rest! Hugs, Sandra :)
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August 12, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Congrats on your high place win. Love Sunita :)
Singh Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Very well worded, struck an instant chord within! Huge Congrats! Sushma A. Singh
Troutman Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Really nice, congratulations!
Y. Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 5:22 AM
Hi Sandra, Your pen is outstanding. I really enjoyed your take on the theme. Who would have thought one could write such a piece and subject is about caves?Your talent shines in this write. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. A Big seven and a fav:-) Alexis
Neumann Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 4:33 AM
This is a beautiful take on four caves . Congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Sandra...this is AWESOME! Congratulations on your very deserved first place. You are on a magical carpet ride...soaring into the stratosphere! A 7 and fave from me! ; )
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 10:51 AM
An uplifting win Sandra, congratulations...
Kent Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Congrats on the well deserved win.
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 8:53 AM
What a wonderful use of the word cave, usually we think of dark and damp, but you turned it into a positive, very inventive, and was rewarded with a well deserved first place win congrats.
Stebbings Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on your 1st., Sandra, with this imaginative and thoughtful poem. Barry.
Leiser Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Love the caves allegory to chambers of our lives, Sandra. How creative and congrats on your top win:)
Haight Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Thank you very much, Laura, for your visit and supportive comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Garcia Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 2:52 PM
This is very beautiful Sandra. Definitely well deserving of a trophy and 2 thumbs up from Houston.
Haight Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so much, Phillip. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments! Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win. A heart warming write about the human heart. It brings one to tears, words like "unseen caves" and "gifts of trust" make this poem so beautiful.
Haight Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thank you, Janis, for your nice visit and lovely comments. I appreciate your support so much. Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Great well-done congrats 1st xxxx
Haight Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy, for your support! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Sandra, just beautiful..congrats on your top premier contest win lady! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. I appreciate your nice comments and support always. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 8:52 AM
This is beautiful Sandra...love it....7
Haight Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph! Sandra
Turner Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Lovely thoughts put into words, Mrs Sandra Hope you are feeling well and getting some exercise.
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Thank you for the uplifting comment, Daniel. Actually, I am not feeling bad at all and that is puzzling to me. I'm pretty active (except for the hours here on my computer with PS). I stretched my use and liking for cake a bit to meet the contest theme...mostly I eat pretty good. So, sometimes the body does it's thing anyway I suppose. Thank you for your concern. Sandra
Shanmugam Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 9:09 AM
How beautiful like a river:)
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Thank you very much, Madhupriya. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Penned beauty with lovely truth reflections is sure to be a winner ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 10:58 AM
You are so kind, CayCay. Thank you for your uplifting support. Hugs, Sandra
Gupta Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Great caves indeed ... Great write ...
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Thank you, Probir. I appreciate your positive comment. Sandra
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