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Our Ancient One

Our most ancient orb Always radiant in her bloom Yes, our lunar moon http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-8.php

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 5:43:00 PM

this is really pretty, and James, I have a technical question for you at soupmail if you don't mind.

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 6/20/2010 4:55:00 AM

I am lured by this one...I always love the moon...and this Haiku is as lovely....^_^ v

Gavin Pattison

Date: 6/15/2010 2:05:00 AM

I enjoyed this, thanks for uploading it. In response to Lynette Chachere; not only would most not want to; no one could. Thanks, Gavin.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/10/2010 8:40:00 PM

a beautiful write.yes, the moon does have an very radiant beauty to it. personally, i'd rather not live without it.but then, i don't believe anyone would want to. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Jay Loveless

Date: 6/10/2010 10:42:00 AM

This is worthy of dedication to her brilliant beauty. She would much aprove. I thank thee for your offering to she who shines radiant in the night. Blessed be ~Rain

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2010 7:15:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your always amazing poetry this morning James. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/9/2010 3:37:00 PM

A beautiful description of the moon, Highlander. It has always held a magical mystique for me. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/9/2010 3:24:00 PM

The most compelling and interesting of all our "orbs"..great write highlander..BG

Rick Parise

Date: 6/9/2010 1:42:00 PM

Love it ,so very excellent~2nd line,SUPERB!!!~Rick

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2010 1:15:00 PM

Great descriptive Haiku...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Date: 6/9/2010 1:15:00 PM

And yes, I can relate to this one. Creative way to share part of our everyday world. Nice to see it in a new light. Keep on writing! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/9/2010 1:06:00 PM

Your Haikus say more than some others James... very descriptive and just like in the contest .. a few words but so meaningful.. enjoyed.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"