Ouch

Half-blind Billy hunts for hot chicks
and drools for big tall girls, his picks.
But grabbing a gal—
turns out it was Hal—
got Billy jaw-busting hard licks.


written October 7, 2016

lustlimerick

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Sandra Haight

October 13, 2016 at 7:14 PM

Janice, congratulations on your fine placement on the winner's list! Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy

October 13, 2016 at 7:20 PM

Thanks so much, Sandra! Janice

Beautiful Scars

October 13, 2016 at 10:46 AM

very cute Janice! Congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy

October 13, 2016 at 11:29 AM

Thanks so much, Luloo! Janice

Kim Rodrigues

October 13, 2016 at 7:30 AM

Congrats!

Janice Canerdy

October 13, 2016 at 7:54 AM

Thanks, Kim! Janice

Agnes Krampe

October 13, 2016 at 7:12 AM

Congrats on your win, Janice.

Janice Canerdy

October 13, 2016 at 7:54 AM

Thanks, Agnes! Janice

Tony Devers

October 13, 2016 at 3:45 AM

Ouch! Nice punchline. Billy's not Donald Trump is he?

Janice Canerdy

October 13, 2016 at 7:53 AM

Could be Trump, couldn't he?! Thanks, Tony. Janice

Jan Allison

October 13, 2016 at 2:31 AM

I REALLY loved this one Janice! Many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

October 13, 2016 at 7:52 AM

Thanks so much, Jan! Janice

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

October 12, 2016 at 11:47 PM

Well done on your well deserved placement Janice Mark

Janice Canerdy

October 13, 2016 at 7:51 AM

Thanks, Mark! Janice

Alexis Y.

October 12, 2016 at 11:34 PM

Hi Janice, This is funny! Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy

October 13, 2016 at 7:51 AM

Thank, Alexis! Janice

Viv Wigley

October 12, 2016 at 10:05 PM

Congrats, Janice, you caught me out- I thought this was written by someone like John Wulf's style . Well done! Viv

Janice Canerdy

October 12, 2016 at 10:09 PM

Viv, thank you so much for sponsoring the contest and for placing my poem! Janice

John Lawless

October 8, 2016 at 7:16 AM

Well, Janice, the "double-entendre" of the final line is .....well anyway this is one great limerick....

Janice Canerdy

October 8, 2016 at 9:08 AM

Thanks so much, John! Janice

Pashang Salehi

October 7, 2016 at 5:55 PM

Nice.... very nice

Janice Canerdy

October 7, 2016 at 8:07 PM

Thanks so much, Pashang! Janice

Jan Allison

October 7, 2016 at 4:58 PM

hilarious! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

October 7, 2016 at 8:07 PM

Jan, thank you so much! Janice

Daniel Turner

October 7, 2016 at 1:30 PM

Janice, this one really made me laugh out loud. Extremely funny limerick!

Janice Canerdy

October 7, 2016 at 1:32 PM

Daniel, thank you so much! You are very supportive. Janice

Chris Green

October 7, 2016 at 1:23 PM

Ha, that's funny. Nicely done surprise ending. :)

Janice Canerdy

October 7, 2016 at 1:33 PM

Thanks so much, Chris! Janice

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