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The arch of the hill is strong As swan's neck poised curved and long Its span builds strength its roof shields To vault free hearts bow with song! March 28, 2020 Let the Pens Flow - Jueju Poetry Contest Sponsored by Jenish Somadas

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Date: 4/23/2020 6:57:00 AM
Love the simile "strong as a swan's neck".
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Date: 3/29/2020 8:23:00 AM
Wishing you warm thoughts and luck in the contest. Wonderfully written poem beautifully penned. Thank you JC Hawkens
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 4/3/2020 9:39:00 PM
Thank you JC! I am very happy you liked my poem. Hope you are well and happy! Lonna
Date: 3/28/2020 12:15:00 PM
This is lovely..
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/28/2020 12:25:00 PM
To finish my appreciation........I am hoping that you and your loved ones are well and happy!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 3/28/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thanks so much. Its nice to hear from someone on PS! Obviously I'm still looking for "rainbows"! LOL Lonna

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