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Other One and a Half Percent of the Time

I do not slither quietly under rocks Unassuming and older, sure Those who misjudge me Rarely do it a second time I am flexible, pliable, eager to please Ninety-eight and half percent of the time It is the other one and a half percent That surprises you, sometimes taking a bite.

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Date: 1/6/2022 12:07:00 PM
Oohoo Caren. You sound like me. You can lead me anywhere but you can't push me an inch. Great stuff. You Go Girl. God Bless, JB
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/6/2022 5:46:00 PM
I believe this is true of both of us my friend
Date: 1/6/2022 7:52:00 AM
Well said, Karen; In my mind, the 1 and 1/2 percent part of most people, is the original and best part. Love this work! Happy New Year my friend!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/6/2022 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much! *drums*
Date: 1/6/2022 7:49:00 AM
Caren, your vitality & courage to be yourself and a writer are RIGHT ON. Happiest of New Year's yet! We have been warned, U drew a line in the Sand, & only negative peeps need be afraid. 2 Tim 1:7. Shalom, shalom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/6/2022 8:13:00 AM
Hahaha Thank you Anil
Date: 1/6/2022 12:25:00 AM
The last two lines of this well-written free verse are outstanding!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/6/2022 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Damned I-Be
Date: 1/5/2022 10:14:00 PM
Those who are habituated taking someone for granted, sometimes needs a bite. Accurately said. Thanks. - Marshall
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/6/2022 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Marshall
Date: 1/5/2022 5:36:00 PM
Your calculation sure is precise. ~ Albert Einstein
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/6/2022 8:13:00 AM
I love Einstein too

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