Orpheus

O my beloved, I hear you in my grave. R omantic notes from thy lire trickle through P proud rock now hollow from thy magic. H owI long to feel thy hand on my cold breast. E ven as I speak, they plot to kill you. U tree envy of thy mythical, poetic, prophetic skills S trenghten/ their resolve. I await you my beloved.

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2017 1:01:00 AM

Jean, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Jean Murray
Date: 10/14/2017 5:27:00 AM

Hi Eve. I hug you right back!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/13/2017 10:45:00 PM

Beautiful Acrostic, my friend, I enjoyed this - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)

Jean Murray
Date: 10/14/2017 5:27:00 AM

Morning Greg. It's so good of you to take the time to comment. Thank you.

Silent One

Date: 10/13/2017 5:53:00 AM

Nice acrostic Jean.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jean Murray
Date: 10/13/2017 8:03:00 AM

Thank you Silent for the placement. I enjoy writing acrostics

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2017 5:53:00 PM

Wonderfully done. I really need to get on the ball. This contest is almost filled!!!

Jean Murray
Date: 10/10/2017 1:14:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 10/6/2017 7:35:00 AM

Beautiful, love how you reflected the tale of Orpheus in the underworld in your use of thy, adding to the age of the tale. It flows so well off the tongue and into the heart.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/6/2017 9:20:00 AM

How lovely to see you old friend. Than you for kind words of praise.

Darren White

Date: 10/5/2017 10:51:00 AM

Great acrostic Jean. It sings, it has music AND it dances.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/5/2017 11:23:00 AM

AND is the opposite of what Silent seeks I fear Darren. I always absorb the information given, then spit it back out as best I can. Once it's in my brain, it has to come out. It does sort of dance 'though, I must agree. Thank you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/5/2017 7:52:00 AM

Ohh Jean, a smooth and seamless Acrostic poem. Your write is enchanting and beautifully written with wonderful rhythm and lovely imagery. I truly enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! :)

Jean Murray
Date: 10/5/2017 11:19:00 AM

So nice a comment Susan. I love this form of poetry. Thank you.