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Oh my beloved, I hear you in my grave.
Romantic notes from thy lire trickle through
Porous rock now hollow from thy magic.
How I long to feel thy hand on my cold breast.
Even as I speak, they plot to kill you.
Utter envy of thy mythical, poetic, prophetic skills
Strengthen their resolve. I await you my beloved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/14/2017 1:01:00 AM
Jean, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 10/14/2017 5:27:00 AM
Hi Eve. I hug you right back!
Date: 10/13/2017 10:45:00 PM
Beautiful Acrostic, my friend, I enjoyed this - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
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Date: 10/14/2017 5:27:00 AM
Morning Greg. It's so good of you to take the time to comment. Thank you.
Date: 10/13/2017 5:53:00 AM
Nice acrostic Jean.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/13/2017 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Silent for the placement. I enjoy writing acrostics
Date: 10/9/2017 5:53:00 PM
Wonderfully done. I really need to get on the ball. This contest is almost filled!!!
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Date: 10/10/2017 1:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 10/6/2017 7:35:00 AM
Beautiful, love how you reflected the tale of Orpheus in the underworld in your use of thy, adding to the age of the tale. It flows so well off the tongue and into the heart.
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Date: 10/6/2017 9:20:00 AM
How lovely to see you old friend. Than you for kind words of praise.
Date: 10/5/2017 10:51:00 AM
Great acrostic Jean. It sings, it has music AND it dances.
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Date: 10/5/2017 11:23:00 AM
AND is the opposite of what Silent seeks I fear Darren. I always absorb the information given, then spit it back out as best I can. Once it's in my brain, it has to come out. It does sort of dance 'though, I must agree. Thank you.
Date: 10/5/2017 7:52:00 AM
Ohh Jean, a smooth and seamless Acrostic poem. Your write is enchanting and beautifully written with wonderful rhythm and lovely imagery. I truly enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 10/5/2017 11:19:00 AM
So nice a comment Susan. I love this form of poetry. Thank you.