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Do orphans ever regain their endorphins

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Date: 8/1/2022 9:30:00 PM
A debated question ..... ! Will they ever be freed from their sense of loneliness or pain.... ! Crisp and terse, fetching so many thoughts into our brain !
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Date: 8/2/2022 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa. I've certainly done worse than 'terse!'
Date: 8/1/2022 7:22:00 PM
Great play on words. God’s eye is on widows and orphans. God bless!
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Date: 8/2/2022 8:36:00 PM
Thank G-d for watching over the most vulnerable among us! :) gw
Date: 8/1/2022 4:18:00 PM
God help the orphans. ~Anaya aka Annie
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Date: 8/1/2022 7:05:00 PM
Yes, indeed: God, please watch over the orphans... He'll take our help gladly...
Date: 8/1/2022 2:56:00 PM
LOL. I believe so gw. Linda
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Date: 8/1/2022 7:06:00 PM
If orphans again experience pleasure, for the rest of us life s/b a treasure...
Date: 8/1/2022 8:07:00 AM
This is a very clever senryu Gershon. I think they do with determination. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/1/2022 6:02:00 AM
Witty Gershon, Ha...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2022 7:07:00 PM
Next up: The orphan who was morphin' into a dolphin who went golfin' on a course...
Date: 8/1/2022 1:10:00 AM
I'm sure they do Gershon in time they get stronger. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/1/2022 7:08:00 PM
Some surely do, Tom. ~ Oar Fin & Snorkel

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