Orphan Stain

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Stain. Mind lurks. Nightingales. Cry their season. Butterflies in pain. From the side of light hue! You are a pile of sorrow. And you collapse out of symbols. But true dreams will rise with the sunrise. In the dress of a discarded orphan.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/30/2021 4:43:00 PM

It is sad when one has to live a lifetime without the love of a mom or dad. But in the journey of life, sometimes, we find people who step in for comfort, nicely written and very deeply connected dear poet. thank you for sharing. Blessings :)

Sotto Poet
Date: 3/30/2021 5:01:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, dear Rose; I'm glad you liked my poem, wish you all the best // Las