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Orphan of Society's Illusions

“We're born alone, we live alone, we die alone. Only through our love and friendship can we create the illusion for the moment that we're not alone.” -- Orson Welles
she dwelt in a seaside stone cottage winds, words and world outside repelled lonely single rose amidst a garden of weeds from without the windows she did not peer recalling not how her life became this way fantasizing family and friends she spoke aloud as if they could hear words blown as puffs from the chimney top orphaned by all, she remained encumbered by solitude, lifted by illusion
*Entry for Brian’s two to fourteen contest October 5, 2011

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Date: 8/9/2012 12:51:00 PM
The mind is a lonely companion, eh? Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 8/6/2012 9:29:00 AM
Hello Carolyn, I'm moved by this melancholy poem of yours, and so glad to find it in the featured section this week. I think of you and hope you are doing better each day. You have been missed by all. Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/22/2012 11:25:00 AM
Congrats on your 3 poems my friend. love phyl
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:17:00 AM
way to go my friend! all three finalists in the soup contest are winners! jimbo
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Date: 10/13/2011 8:48:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's sponsored contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2011 3:50:00 PM
I knew this one was a winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2011 4:16:00 PM
very powerful and sad poem. it's amazing that she is still alive - that illusion must give her some kind of hope. I LOVE "words blown as puffs from the chimney top" what a moving line. the poor woman. this is a great, tho depressing, depiction of lonliness, realistic too. so glad brian saw the merit in this. congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/9/2011 3:47:00 PM
This is beyond amazing, Carolyn! Congratulations on a very well deserved First Place! I'm adding this to my "Favs. List". I truly enjoyed this and read it twice! Couldn't reach you by phone for some reason, Seafaress.. Hope your weekend's going well. Love, Annalise
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Date: 10/9/2011 2:27:00 PM
Awesome write,Carolyn.Congratulations on your well deserved win....
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Date: 10/9/2011 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your awsome first place win!!!!!!!!======Lpri
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Date: 10/7/2011 5:32:00 PM
FYI...the list after Mr. Tolley's name is, of course, movies Orson Wells Directed that I absolutely find ASTONISHING!
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Date: 10/7/2011 5:30:00 PM
WOW! I didn't know you're an O.Wells fan! Right ON! Excellent Piece of Poetry in motion with a hint of coconut lotion...I love! I would love to hear from you again one day. I apologize if I was rude to you in any or Many ways. Sometimes I am mistaken, but I try to accept like one of my favorite writers of recent guides..."live in the still of now"-Eckhart Tolley Citizen Kane Othello Mr. Arkadin Touch of Evil The Fountain of Youth Chimes at Midnight The Immortal Story F for Fake
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/9/2011 12:55:00 PM
Joey, I did a paper on Orson Welles in school. Indeed, he was a briliant man.
Date: 10/7/2011 3:08:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “A Few Thoughts Arise From This Very Stirring & Beautiful In Loves Ways Painting My Dear, Precious & Priceless & Beautiful Carolyn! *^_^* First Would Be The FACT That Orson Was Absolutely Wrong In His Assumptions *^_^* Second, We Do Live Amid A Place In Time Wherein Many Fail to See & Thus, Allow The Ways of The World to Lead They Into Seclusion & Far From The Light.... ~ *^_^* ~ Third for Some Reason I Was Given The Image In Passing of, Norman Bates' Mother? *^_#* Either Or My Dear Beautiful Carolyn, This Is A Magnificently Brushed In Profounds Verse; Touching The Saddened Parallels of Truths Reflections, My Dear!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *
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Date: 10/7/2011 9:53:00 AM
Beauitiful piece that perfectly compliments the quote, my dear. A winner for sure : )
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:44:00 AM
Carolyn, a haunting poem, I am just mesmerized and drawn to it. I have read it over and over. I hope you are feeling okay today, my thoughts are with you. Take care, you are a rose. Lee
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Date: 10/6/2011 11:23:00 PM
What a sure win with Brian's contest! You have blown me away with this awesome write! You have successfully put together a perfect poem!! I really like it!
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Date: 10/6/2011 7:45:00 PM
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Date: 10/6/2011 7:38:00 PM
Hey Carolyn! I've missed your poetry.. But reading it has been very delightful.. thanks for the read.. take care.. love the imagery btw
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Date: 10/6/2011 6:06:00 PM
repellant roses? dang, now there's a concept! keep on writing, felix! Love, Oscar
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Date: 10/6/2011 5:45:00 PM
You drew me in with this one Carolyn, best of my wishes for a success with this soul-full) write yours Joe..OH.! i got the comment on a win.? i looked down the members winning liist, however could not see the "contest"
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Date: 10/6/2011 4:45:00 PM
Kind of an Emily D. person. One wonders what combination of experiences can produce such seclusion. Good food for thought, dear Carolyn. Love, daver
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Date: 10/6/2011 4:28:00 PM
I really, really liked this poem. Thank you. Tony
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Date: 10/6/2011 4:18:00 PM
Sooft and beautifu Caroline, you weave your words into a lovely tapestry. Can't help but win my friend!
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Date: 10/6/2011 3:22:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Great description of loneliness..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and giving a kind review..Sara
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/6/2011 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. It's always my pleasure to read your poetry.

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