Orphan of Society's Illusions

“We're born alone, we live alone, we die alone. Only through our love and friendship can we 
create the illusion for the moment that we're not alone.”  -- Orson Welles 


she dwelt in a seaside stone cottage winds, words and world outside repelled lonely single rose amidst a garden of weeds from without the windows she did not peer recalling not how her life became this way fantasizing family and friends she spoke aloud as if they could hear words blown as puffs from the chimney top orphaned by all, she remained encumbered by solitude, lifted by illusion
*Entry for Brian’s two to fourteen contest October 5, 2011
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Austin Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 12:51 PM
The mind is a lonely companion, eh? Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 9:29 AM
Hello Carolyn, I'm moved by this melancholy poem of yours, and so glad to find it in the featured section this week. I think of you and hope you are doing better each day. You have been missed by all. Love, Carrie
Babcock Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Congrats on your 3 poems my friend. love phyl
Goff Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:17 AM
way to go my friend! all three finalists in the soup contest are winners! jimbo
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 8:48 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's sponsored contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 3:50 PM
I knew this one was a winner..Congrats..Sara
Susan Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 4:16 PM
very powerful and sad poem. it's amazing that she is still alive - that illusion must give her some kind of hope. I LOVE "words blown as puffs from the chimney top" what a moving line. the poor woman. this is a great, tho depressing, depiction of lonliness, realistic too. so glad brian saw the merit in this. congratulations on your win!
Haick Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 3:47 PM
This is beyond amazing, Carolyn! Congratulations on a very well deserved First Place! I'm adding this to my "Favs. List". I truly enjoyed this and read it twice! Couldn't reach you by phone for some reason, Seafaress.. Hope your weekend's going well. Love, Annalise
Arowolo Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Awesome write,Carolyn.Congratulations on your well deserved win....
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations on your awsome first place win!!!!!!!!======Lpri
Mister Roboto Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 5:32 PM
FYI...the list after Mr. Tolley's name is, of course, movies Orson Wells Directed that I absolutely find ASTONISHING!
Mister Roboto Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 5:30 PM
WOW! I didn't know you're an O.Wells fan! Right ON! Excellent Piece of Poetry in motion with a hint of coconut lotion...I love! I would love to hear from you again one day. I apologize if I was rude to you in any or Many ways. Sometimes I am mistaken, but I try to accept like one of my favorite writers of recent guides..."live in the still of now"-Eckhart Tolley Citizen Kane Othello Mr. Arkadin Touch of Evil The Fountain of Youth Chimes at Midnight The Immortal Story F for Fake
Devonshire Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Joey, I did a paper on Orson Welles in school. Indeed, he was a briliant man.
Sadberry Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Smile, *^_^* “A Few Thoughts Arise From This Very Stirring & Beautiful In Loves Ways Painting My Dear, Precious & Priceless & Beautiful Carolyn! *^_^* First Would Be The FACT That Orson Was Absolutely Wrong In His Assumptions *^_^* Second, We Do Live Amid A Place In Time Wherein Many Fail to See & Thus, Allow The Ways of The World to Lead They Into Seclusion & Far From The Light.... ~ *^_^* ~ Third for Some Reason I Was Given The Image In Passing of, Norman Bates' Mother? *^_#* Either Or My Dear Beautiful Carolyn, This Is A Magnificently Brushed In Profounds Verse; Touching The Saddened Parallels of Truths Reflections, My Dear!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 9:53 AM
Beauitiful piece that perfectly compliments the quote, my dear. A winner for sure : )
Ramage Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 1:44 AM
Carolyn, a haunting poem, I am just mesmerized and drawn to it. I have read it over and over. I hope you are feeling okay today, my thoughts are with you. Take care, you are a rose. Lee
Sivey Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 11:23 PM
What a sure win with Brian's contest! You have blown me away with this awesome write! You have successfully put together a perfect poem!! I really like it!
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 7:45 PM
check soup mail
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 7:38 PM
Hey Carolyn! I've missed your poetry.. But reading it has been very delightful.. thanks for the read.. take care.. love the imagery btw
Jones Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 6:06 PM
repellant roses? dang, now there's a concept! keep on writing, felix! Love, Oscar
Maverick Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 5:45 PM
You drew me in with this one Carolyn, best of my wishes for a success with this soul-full) write yours Joe..OH.! i got the comment on a win.? i looked down the members winning liist, however could not see the "contest"
Austin Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Kind of an Emily D. person. One wonders what combination of experiences can produce such seclusion. Good food for thought, dear Carolyn. Love, daver
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 4:28 PM
I really, really liked this poem. Thank you. Tony
Wesley Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Sooft and beautifu Caroline, you weave your words into a lovely tapestry. Can't help but win my friend!
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Reads like a winner..Great description of loneliness..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and giving a kind review..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Sara. It's always my pleasure to read your poetry.
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