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Orogenic Kiss

Rising from sylvan embraces solitude of the wild, wild wood hunger burning deep within these caverns and temples within my misunderstood being; haunted by you touched by you satisfied only by the sweet nourishing currents that course through your veins; Soaring down from the mountains on heavy black wings in an avalanche of gabbro accumulation of my dormancy your scent your heat salts to revive me warmth to thaw me; Volcanic desire fire breathing the air softening the hardness of my plutonic heart burning the fibres of my arboreal soul before plunging into the waterfall momentarily destroying my composure; Spirit reengaged river’s current supporting my weak state towards your healing thalassic body waves of emotion break over me your liquid arms hold me your saliferous kiss beguiles me; How I missed this elemental perfect you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/26/2008 3:43:00 AM
Wow Nigel! You have a lot of passion. This is really a great write. Glad you liked the Haiku. Thank you. Love, Robin
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Date: 11/21/2008 3:22:00 PM
Nigel Wow every heated passionate line kept me wondering what was next, great flowing magic you have!! Laura :)
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Date: 11/17/2008 8:42:00 AM
Exceptional! I genuinely enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
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Date: 11/14/2008 9:46:00 AM
Nigel.... you have real talent.... I am reading on....
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Date: 11/13/2008 8:04:00 AM
The last 4 lines sum the whole thing up here, my passionate friend! Beautiful, burning write! love Kristin
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Date: 11/12/2008 7:30:00 PM
Outstanding Nigel!! Great choice of words and what a volcano of feelings. Hot stuff full of longing and passion. The metaphors give more always. Must read it again!! Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/12/2008 9:43:00 AM
Yikes and holy hot stuff! : ) Awesome passionate write about love. Deeply steamy and extremely well written. Wow. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/12/2008 9:15:00 AM
Had to get my dictionaly out for this one :). This poem is like something you cant put down..Ive read it over and over.. and will read it many times again. Love, BG
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Date: 11/12/2008 6:16:00 AM
Nigel this is provocative passion on steroids WOW!!!!!!! I can feel the intensity in this write. I had to sip a beverage in between lines just to cool myself before the crescendo. Marvelous piece. I think there is a new word in the dictionary for passion it is spelled NIGEL excellent piece Michael Torres
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Date: 11/12/2008 5:31:00 AM
Another amazing write Nigel. The flow in this piece is perfect. The poem never loses a beat. I love the feel of the Greek ocean(thalassic), liquid arms hold me. Your love for the ocean is very evident. Chris
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