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If you are a poet You already know it, To words you forever are bound. Your brain has them in there, You must make them clear. They're music without any sound. You didn't pick them, You cannot evict them. They just keep rolling around. They'll stay in your head, You can't put them to bed, Until you have written them down. Inspired by Michaels's Original Form challentge. This is a,a,b,c, c, b I think it is an original

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Date: 2/3/2009 10:29:00 AM
Very clever Joyce. Yes it looks like an original to me and reads like a winner. Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/2/2009 6:17:00 PM
Great form and style, Joyce. Beautiful lines and thoughts grace this poem with elegance and hope for any writer who reads this. Best of luck in the contest and always wishing you well. Peace always, John
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Date: 2/2/2009 5:59:00 PM
Well done, Donna!! This one is quite a challenge...you met it head on!! ~ Carrie
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