Jadazzle United Poet Rhyme

Orient Express:

We hear the engine whistle 
The hissing of the steam 
The hairs on our necks begin to bristle 
As we meet the arrival of a dream 
We didn't think we had a chance of winning 
Entering just for fun I guess 
but thanks to simple poem we are grinning 
As we board the Orient express.
 
London to Paris, what a dream come true
I never dreamed the sparks would fly between us two
The fireman stokes the boiler; and releases a jet of steam
The guard collects our tickets and we begin our dream
Days and nights together on this magnificent train
Travel through beautiful places, seeing new terrain
Enthralled at the elegance and beauty of the carriage
Will our trip together end up with our marriage
 
Looking so handsome in your new dinner jacket
Glad you won this holiday; it must have cost a packet
The ambiance of the surroundings is utter bliss
We seal our relationship with a tender kiss
Holding hands so gently we share a vintage wine
Sitting in the Pullman coach you rest your head on mine
Velvet blue sky and shining stars start to cast their spell 
The romantic seine has such stories to tell.

In Paris we visit the galleries of fine art
Holding your hand I realise you have captured my heart
We pass through the Arc De Triomphe and climb the Eiffel Tower 
Now I surrender to your feminine power
Retire with me to the Napoleon suite 
Sharing in the splendour of this romantic treat
Promise to be my Mam'selle Josephine 
Or expose my heart to Madame Guillotine  

You look so beautiful and smell divine 
I kiss your lips, They taste of fine wine
We are lost in the flames of passions fire 
As we quench the thirst of true loves desire
Our bodies rise and fall as we entwine
Oh I’m so glad that you are mine
All those feelings denied and for so long suppressed 
Come to the fore aboard the Orient express.

Passion abates we are wrapped in each other’s arms
Darren wants more so I succumb to his great charms
Our fire ignites with desire and great passion
Hour upon hour – this man I can’t ration
Finally we reach the end of the line
Our love making session has been so divine
Arm in arm we head out of the carriage door
So hopelessly in love – who could ask for more

Written By Jan Allison & Darren Watson
15th April 2014

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Carolyn Devonshire May 20, 2014 at 10:43 AM Oh, so much passion in your ride on the Orient Express! What a great "prize" this was to win. In October, I'm hoping to head for the UK and would surely like to take the Chunnel to Paris. Jan and Darren, you write beautifully together! Love to both of you, Carolyn Jadazzle United May 20, 2014 at 4:38 PM Hi Carolyn thank you for such lovely comments,I do hope you have a lovely trip. Darren and I have so much fun when we write and I hope this is reflected in our works. Hugs Jan xxxx

Verlena S. Walker May 18, 2014 at 1:07 AM Very nice once again. Enjoyed my visit... Verlena Jadazzle United May 18, 2014 at 2:58 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Verlena. Hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts May 14, 2014 at 12:19 AM Would love to try the Orient Express one day....now where are the comp. rules. Lol.......well done you two, you took us on a great trip ( nearly said ride and thought noooo that's sounds rude) ......Seren Jadazzle United May 14, 2014 at 4:57 PM Oh we both enjoyed the ride Seren. Lol Hugs Jan xxxx