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Inspiration drawn from the first picture on Nette Onclaude's Four Lines contest.

Receiving to give more in strength Strength reaching upwards as columns Columns support shelter above Above is great Intelligence...' ©Joe Maverick 6-6-2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2015 7:59:00 PM

I really like this one, Joe. And the way you take from the end of each line to build the next. A very cool poetry form!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2015 6:38:00 PM

If the foundation crumbles sometimes the mind will quickly follow. (But not always) I enjoyed your poem Joe.

James Peranteau

Date: 7/3/2015 10:28:00 AM

I'm tagging along with my poetry pal Daver on this one....mind or soul. I'd like to think the mind...above where our strength comes from..."oriel"<~~window; Keystone<~~mind...have a great 4th dear poet.....much love, james

Daver Austin

Date: 6/18/2015 11:14:00 AM

Puzzle. Unless...a window into soul. I'd like to think this might be the answer. Deep, Joe, and wonderful. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2015 4:05:00 PM

very nice, Joe, let me see what is next.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/12/2015 11:35:00 AM

What a great penned, this poem is painted beautiful and a short words means a lot........A.M.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/12/2015 7:41:00 AM

Above is a great intelligence, held by a solid base a true foundation..will go on and read more, Joe

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/11/2015 8:54:00 PM

This is an awesome write Joe! I look forward to reading the next! Aloha, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2015 9:50:00 AM

Nicely penned Joe...

Constance La France

Date: 6/10/2015 3:58:00 PM

Joe, deep and beautifully penned, a wonderful write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, beneath, used to press leaves also

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/9/2015 7:09:00 AM

Holy shit man, this is deeper than the Pacific. And all of that while it's reaching upwards. Nice!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/8/2015 3:52:00 PM

I love the philosophy you espouse here... the last/first word repetition is most effective! Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2015 10:06:00 AM

Am totally blown away by this string of poems - brilliantly creative Joe i do hope you do one for the contest too:-) Hugs jan xx 7 x