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Inspiration drawn from the first picture on Nette Onclaude's Four Lines contest.

Oriel Into

Receiving to give more in strength

Strength reaching upwards as columns

Columns support shelter above

Above is great Intelligence...'


©Joe Maverick 6-6-2015

Copyright © Joe Maverick | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

August 5, 2015 at 7:59 PM

I really like this one, Joe. And the way you take from the end of each line to build the next. A very cool poetry form!

Richard Lamoureux

July 12, 2015 at 6:38 PM

If the foundation crumbles sometimes the mind will quickly follow. (But not always) I enjoyed your poem Joe.

James Peranteau

July 3, 2015 at 10:28 AM

I'm tagging along with my poetry pal Daver on this one....mind or soul. I'd like to think the mind...above where our strength comes from..."oriel"<~~window; Keystone<~~mind...have a great 4th dear poet.....much love, james

June 18, 2015 at 11:14 AM

Puzzle. Unless...a window into soul. I'd like to think this might be the answer. Deep, Joe, and wonderful. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

June 15, 2015 at 4:05 PM

very nice, Joe, let me see what is next.

Afolabi Muideen

June 12, 2015 at 11:35 AM

What a great penned, this poem is painted beautiful and a short words means a lot........A.M.

June 12, 2015 at 7:41 AM

Above is a great intelligence, held by a solid base a true foundation..will go on and read more, Joe

Connie Marcum Wong

June 11, 2015 at 8:54 PM

This is an awesome write Joe! I look forward to reading the next! Aloha, Connie

June 11, 2015 at 9:50 AM

Nicely penned Joe...

Constance La France

June 10, 2015 at 3:58 PM

Joe, deep and beautifully penned, a wonderful write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, beneath, used to press leaves also

Scott Thirtyseven

June 9, 2015 at 7:09 AM

Holy shit man, this is deeper than the Pacific. And all of that while it's reaching upwards. Nice!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

June 8, 2015 at 3:52 PM

I love the philosophy you espouse here... the last/first word repetition is most effective! Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

June 7, 2015 at 10:06 AM

Am totally blown away by this string of poems - brilliantly creative Joe i do hope you do one for the contest too:-) Hugs jan xx 7 x

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