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Oriel Into

Receiving to give more in strength

Strength reaching upwards as columns

Columns support shelter above

Above is great Intelligence...'


©Joe Maverick 6-6-2015

Copyright © Joe Maverick | Year Posted 2015

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/5/2015 7:59:00 PM I really like this one, Joe. And the way you take from the end of each line to build the next. A very cool poetry form! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/12/2015 6:38:00 PM If the foundation crumbles sometimes the mind will quickly follow. (But not always) I enjoyed your poem Joe. Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 7/3/2015 10:28:00 AM I'm tagging along with my poetry pal Daver on this one....mind or soul. I'd like to think the mind...above where our strength comes from..."oriel"<~~window; Keystone<~~mind...have a great 4th dear poet.....much love, james Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 6/18/2015 11:14:00 AM Puzzle. Unless...a window into soul. I'd like to think this might be the answer. Deep, Joe, and wonderful. Love, daver Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/15/2015 4:05:00 PM very nice, Joe, let me see what is next. Login to Reply

Afolabi Muideen Date: 6/12/2015 11:35:00 AM What a great penned, this poem is painted beautiful and a short words means a lot........A.M. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 6/12/2015 7:41:00 AM Above is a great intelligence, held by a solid base a true foundation..will go on and read more, Joe Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/11/2015 8:54:00 PM This is an awesome write Joe! I look forward to reading the next! Aloha, Connie Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 6/11/2015 9:50:00 AM Nicely penned Joe... Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/10/2015 3:58:00 PM Joe, deep and beautifully penned, a wonderful write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, beneath, used to press leaves also Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 6/9/2015 7:09:00 AM Holy shit man, this is deeper than the Pacific. And all of that while it's reaching upwards. Nice!!! Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 6/8/2015 3:52:00 PM I love the philosophy you espouse here... the last/first word repetition is most effective! Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/7/2015 10:06:00 AM Am totally blown away by this string of poems - brilliantly creative Joe i do hope you do one for the contest too:-) Hugs jan xx 7 x Login to Reply