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Organized Chaos

*no outsiders allowed inside a lone rule breaking in a no rule zone nowhere to go in an open sea, lost with somewhere to go a sleepless dream or was it a dreamless sleep? getting confused with the steadiness of finally feeling a constant heartbeat slowing down in the fast lane... unpredictable in the land of inevitability the silence of the heart thunders in the mind niggling...refusing to accept what it all means, what it implies denial or is it blindness? putting up a **deep facade but really just floating-- feet on the clouds with head in the ground solid stone crumbles to dust as ice melts the fire of resistance--now sputtering, sparkling shyly as diamonds would upside down right side up downside up up side left head tucked in with neck sticking out heart in throat, swallowing it getting thirsty in the rain fools made out of geniuses or is it geniuses made out of fools? love~ so many are lost in it, puzzling the mystified and the rational yet many understand it when things fall into place but once a missing piece does fit, it only finds other mysteries stumbling on answers in organized chaos no wonder people go crazy over it Jan. 25, 2010 ok writing this sort of confused me lol * found this posted on door somewhere here ** snatched this from Chris Aechtner (sorry Chris you're like a mushroom here, so used it without permission, hope that's ok ^_~) haha wrote this before a parent's meeting so have to rush out of here-- heehee trying to squeeze in an entry in Kristen's Oxymoronica contest :) will try to catch up on comments soon, promise :) thanks!! ok Wilma sticking with this title, thanks Missy :)

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Date: 2/22/2011 9:19:00 AM
LOVE...a no rule zone. ain't that the perfect definition.
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:15:00 AM
beautifully woven web of metaphors and ironies. lovely...the silence of the heart thunders in the mind...so intoxicating!
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:57:00 AM
What an awesome write filled with oxymorons, Nikko. I think the very best one is the title itself. Hope you won a prize in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/3/2011 7:02:00 AM
That's life. I hate to repeat a worn out cliche, but I suppose most go through this sort of turmoil. You have covered the subject beautifully. Love Dave
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Date: 1/29/2011 6:32:00 AM
Very, very , very good My dear Nikko... Excellent write and I love the title...with love from me to you always...Michael
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Date: 1/27/2011 7:37:00 PM
It gets better and better NIkko. LOTS Of oxymorons in this one!! Isn't that a weird name. Oxy MORON. Good grief. Hey thanks so much for making my blog go hot. With your magic touch. haha. I'm starting to forget what it means to have a hot blog. I sure like this poem and I hope it does really well in the contest, Luv ,Andrea
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Date: 1/27/2011 6:12:00 PM
This one is a very brilliant write !Nice use of oxymorons--kashinath
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Date: 1/27/2011 3:27:00 PM
It got me confused at first...but all it was a excelent poem
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:19:00 PM
Keep your title ..it is the essence of the Oxymoron contest.. good luck with this tremendous write u have so aptly penned my sweet friend.. luv..
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Date: 1/25/2011 8:00:00 AM
whooa, nikko.. glad you're still kicking because this write is surely clicking, lol... astig!! miss ya, girl and best of winning streaks in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:34:00 AM
Wonderful entry to the contest of oxymoronica, nikko. Good luck
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Date: 1/25/2011 3:32:00 AM
Hey there, me again.. I love the changes and it doesn't take away from your initial message just reinforcing it!! enjoy dinner ;)
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Date: 1/25/2011 2:34:00 AM
I rather like the title Missy it fits quite well with this piece so I reckon you should keep it.. Oh well just my two cents worth.. Love this write of yours btw ;) Hurry back from the meeting hehe
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