Organized Chaos

*no outsiders allowed inside
a lone rule breaking in
a no rule zone
nowhere to go in an open sea,
lost with somewhere to go

a sleepless dream
or was it a dreamless sleep?

getting confused with the steadiness
of finally feeling a constant heartbeat
slowing down in the fast lane...
unpredictable in the land of inevitability

the silence of the heart
thunders
in the mind

niggling...refusing to accept
what it all means, what it implies

denial or is it blindness?
putting up a **deep facade
but really
just floating--
feet on the clouds
with head in the ground

solid stone crumbles to dust
as ice melts the fire
of resistance--now sputtering,
sparkling shyly
as diamonds would

upside down
right side up

downside up
up side left

head tucked in
with neck sticking out
heart in throat, swallowing it
getting thirsty in the rain

fools made out of geniuses
or is it
geniuses made out of fools?

love~
so many are lost in it,
puzzling the mystified 
and the rational
yet many understand it
when things fall into place

but 
once a missing piece does fit,
it only finds other mysteries

stumbling on answers
in organized chaos

no wonder
people go crazy over it





Jan. 25, 2010

ok writing this sort of confused me lol

* found this posted on door somewhere here
** snatched this from Chris Aechtner (sorry Chris you're
like a mushroom here, so used it without permission, hope that's ok ^_~)

haha wrote this before a parent's meeting so have to rush out of here--
heehee trying to squeeze in an entry in Kristen's Oxymoronica contest :)

will try to catch up on comments soon, promise :) thanks!!

ok Wilma sticking with this title, thanks Missy :)
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Badmus Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:19 AM
LOVE...a no rule zone. ain't that the perfect definition.
Badmus Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:15 AM
beautifully woven web of metaphors and ironies. lovely...the silence of the heart thunders in the mind...so intoxicating!
Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 9:57 AM
What an awesome write filled with oxymorons, Nikko. I think the very best one is the title itself. Hope you won a prize in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Austin Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 7:02 AM
That's life. I hate to repeat a worn out cliche, but I suppose most go through this sort of turmoil. You have covered the subject beautifully. Love Dave
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January 29, 2011 at 6:32 AM
Very, very , very good My dear Nikko... Excellent write and I love the title...with love from me to you always...Michael
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 7:37 PM
It gets better and better NIkko. LOTS Of oxymorons in this one!! Isn't that a weird name. Oxy MORON. Good grief. Hey thanks so much for making my blog go hot. With your magic touch. haha. I'm starting to forget what it means to have a hot blog. I sure like this poem and I hope it does really well in the contest, Luv ,Andrea
Poet Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 6:12 PM
This one is a very brilliant write !Nice use of oxymorons--kashinath
Arvizu Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 3:27 PM
It got me confused at first...but all it was a excelent poem
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:19 PM
Keep your title ..it is the essence of the Oxymoron contest.. good luck with this tremendous write u have so aptly penned my sweet friend.. luv..
Onclaud Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 8:00 AM
whooa, nikko.. glad you're still kicking because this write is surely clicking, lol... astig!! miss ya, girl and best of winning streaks in the contest! :) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:34 AM
Wonderful entry to the contest of oxymoronica, nikko. Good luck
Neels Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 3:32 AM
Hey there, me again.. I love the changes and it doesn't take away from your initial message just reinforcing it!! enjoy dinner ;)
Neels Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 2:34 AM
I rather like the title Missy it fits quite well with this piece so I reckon you should keep it.. Oh well just my two cents worth.. Love this write of yours btw ;) Hurry back from the meeting hehe
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