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Ordinary Orange



An ordinary orange
Its juice running down my chin
Sweet tart its flavor
Globes with hidden delights
A treat for me and the king…



3/5/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:49:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/8/2016 7:20:00 PM

You've turned it into a very sensual fruit. I liked the globe terminology and your surprising last line.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/8/2016 9:36:00 AM

Barbara, congratulations on your well-deserved win. Jankce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2016 3:39:00 PM

Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/6/2016 7:36:00 PM

Hi Barbara, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/6/2016 5:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Barbara

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/6/2016 3:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Barbara :)

Beautiful Scars

Date: 3/6/2016 10:20:00 AM

Barbara....congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2016 9:06:00 AM

- Barbara, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2016 8:05:00 PM

globes with hidden delights. HOW nice that line is, Barbara.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/5/2016 5:24:00 PM

I love the juice but hate the sticky mess. Really like the write and by the way. The king is ready for a refill! Peace dear lady:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2016 1:33:00 PM

+ much vitamins .... great and juicy, Barbara :) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/5/2016 1:26:00 PM

I shall have an orange in your honor Barbara...great tanka...(:^WW^:)

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