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Ordinary Orange

An Acrostic Sonnet inspired by United Colours Yellow Poetry Contest of Silent One:

Orange, which is not such a favored hue,
Rarely decorates hills, streams or plains.
Does orange matter? Well, in road work lanes,
It paints the bright cones guiding cars on through!
Not very much else does that color do!
As a terrorist alert, it’s made gains.
Really bright, it highlights, but makes bad stains.
Yet I love Cheetos, which are orange too!

Ordinary yes, but it's the new black!
Red and yellow birthed it; that‘s quite grand.
Autumn and Halloween gives it glory days.
Not to mention also this: we can’t lack
Getting its one vitamin named C, and
Evenings are best when it sets skies ablaze!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 3/14/2016 11:41:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:48:00 AM
Such a fantastic write on Orange.... YOUR STYLE IS SO UNIQUE Andrea... I SIMPLY ENJOYED READING THIS ONE... 7/7
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:46:00 PM
I liked this a lot. My favorite color growing up. About time it gets some love! Loved the first 2 lines especially
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea - much deserved - Lindsay
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Date: 3/8/2016 5:03:00 PM
Greetings, Andrea. Congratulations on your first place in Silent One contest. I love your Acrostic. You have described all the things that the color orange is used for and the benefits we get from it like vitamin C and blazed sunsets! Thank you for your kind comment. Enjoy your evening. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:28:00 AM
Interesting take on the color.
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Date: 3/7/2016 10:10:00 AM
This one hit the orange list..Way to go..Congrats on your tangerine winner..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2016 6:01:00 AM
A very ingenious way of creating a sonnet, which is also acrostic!!! Congrats for your WIN Andrea!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/6/2016 11:50:00 PM
You have converted the ordinary into extraordinary with your poetical prowess. Congratulations...
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:58:00 PM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. This was a hard one to find a way in which to go. You found a good way....MIKE.
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:14:00 PM
Andrea, C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S on your wonderful win ~
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea
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Date: 3/6/2016 3:23:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Andrea :)
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Date: 3/6/2016 2:30:00 PM
Stopping by once more to say congrats, Andrea! I think you went above and beyond with combining the multiple forms, while containing a lot of humorous references. I'm surprised that I haven't a read an orange poem yet that mentions those orange and white cream-sicles! MMmm...
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Date: 3/6/2016 2:22:00 PM
Congrats on your super win Andrea! ;)
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Date: 3/6/2016 1:27:00 PM
Smiling ;in shades of orange! Congrats to you. BG
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Date: 3/6/2016 1:08:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/6/2016 11:47:00 AM
Cleverly crafted. Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 3/6/2016 11:28:00 AM
Love the way you did this, Andrea! An Acrostic Sonnet, so difficult, but you really did it well. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/6/2016 11:04:00 AM
Your wit never cease to amaze me Andrea! Congratulations in you placement!!
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:58:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win. The pic with the guy in the tub is funny. I have come to like Acrostic Sonnets.
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:36:00 AM
I do love the moon when it's shade is orange...but not rust washing down from the door hinge....I was thinking of writing one and came across the rhyme for orange :)
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:58:00 AM
Very clever rhyme scheme Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:07:00 AM
- Andrea, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea!
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