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Ordinary Orange

An Acrostic Sonnet inspired by United Colours Yellow Poetry Contest of Silent One:

Orange, which is not such a favored hue,
Rarely decorates hills, streams or plains.
Does orange matter? Well, in road work lanes,
It paints the bright cones guiding cars on through!
Not very much else does that color do!
As a terrorist alert, it’s made gains.
Really bright, it highlights, but makes bad stains.
Yet I love Cheetos, which are orange too!

Ordinary yes, but it's the new black!
Red and yellow birthed it; that‘s quite grand.
Autumn and Halloween gives it glory days.
Not to mention also this: we can’t lack
Getting its one vitamin named C, and
Evenings are best when it sets skies ablaze!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
Fiery Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Such a fantastic write on Orange.... YOUR STYLE IS SO UNIQUE Andrea... I SIMPLY ENJOYED READING THIS ONE... 7/7
Carter Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:46 PM
I liked this a lot. My favorite color growing up. About time it gets some love! Loved the first 2 lines especially
Laurie Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea - much deserved - Lindsay
Crisci Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Greetings, Andrea. Congratulations on your first place in Silent One contest. I love your Acrostic. You have described all the things that the color orange is used for and the benefits we get from it like vitamin C and blazed sunsets! Thank you for your kind comment. Enjoy your evening. Hugs, Andrew.
Inman Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Interesting take on the color.
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 10:10 AM
This one hit the orange list..Way to go..Congrats on your tangerine winner..Sara
Kimathi Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 6:01 AM
A very ingenious way of creating a sonnet, which is also acrostic!!! Congrats for your WIN Andrea!!! ;-)
Gupta Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 11:50 PM
You have converted the ordinary into extraordinary with your poetical prowess. Congratulations...
Raven Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. This was a hard one to find a way in which to go. You found a good way....MIKE.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Andrea, C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S on your wonderful win ~
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea
Leiser Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Andrea :)
Hicks Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Stopping by once more to say congrats, Andrea! I think you went above and beyond with combining the multiple forms, while containing a lot of humorous references. I'm surprised that I haven't a read an orange poem yet that mentions those orange and white cream-sicles! MMmm...
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Congrats on your super win Andrea! ;)
Gorelick Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 1:27 PM
Smiling ;in shades of orange! Congrats to you. BG
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Cleverly crafted. Congratulations Andrea
Haight Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Love the way you did this, Andrea! An Acrostic Sonnet, so difficult, but you really did it well. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs, Sandra
Milliner Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Your wit never cease to amaze me Andrea! Congratulations in you placement!!
Carmack Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win. The pic with the guy in the tub is funny. I have come to like Acrostic Sonnets.
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:36 AM
I do love the moon when it's shade is orange...but not rust washing down from the door hinge....I was thinking of writing one and came across the rhyme for orange :)
Scars Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Very clever rhyme scheme Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:07 AM
- Andrea, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations Andrea!
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