Orange Crush the Adventures of Soda Pop

My earliest recollection was being placed in a Coca Cola cooler in a Barbershop in Virginiatown Ontario. I heard the sound of the Nickle being placed in the coin slot. Then an eager little boy opened the top and peered in with twinkling blue eyes. I wondered which one of us he would choose? His tiny little hand reached towards me and guided me through a metal maze and yanked me out. He popped my top with the opener on the side of the Red machine. I wonder if that is how I got the name "Soda Pop". He held me close to his chest brought me over to his chair and placed me beside a stack of comics. I watched as he jumped up gleefully onto his chair.

He grabbed me with his two little hands and put me up to his mouth. My orange fizziness passed over his lips, onto his tongue and then down his throat. A big toothy smile and an orange coated tongue. I felt his little tummy bursting until a big burp and a giggle gave him relief. Even after my orange had been consumed he seemed to enjoy the texture of my glass as he rotated me in his hands. I remember him turning me upside down and peering at the room through my base. He liked the way I played with the light. When he was done he placed me in a paper bag with his comics to take me home.

To be continued...
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Hicks Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 9:31 PM
I liked this Richard... in a strange yet good way. I can almost see it in a children's book with colorful little pictures and thought-boxes over the soda pop. A++ for originality!
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Here I am at last Richard. Between my computer problems and lack of time over the holidays I am happy to say I can now start getting caught up. This is a magical adventure of a soda pop. Brilliant idea and executed in an enjoyable story. I can't wait to read the rest. XOXO
Lamoureux Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 9:10 PM
Hi Brenda I appreciate that you took time to read the series. Hugs Richard.
Deschler Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 1:40 AM
A wonderful personification piece. I really liked the nostalgic feel of this creative poem. I will be returning to read more!... My Mom collects Coca-Cola memorabilia, so I think she would enjoy reading this one, too!... Happy New Year, Rick! I wish you all the best for 2015!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Hi and thanks Kelly. I use to have a big button Coke sign that I refurbished. It was one of the many things I lost in my divorce. Thankfully that was many many years ago.
Hamilton Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 8:28 PM
real cool and excellent pen Rick have a great year hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 10:39 PM
Thanks Shadow! Enjoy your New Years Celebration.
Horsman Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 8:35 AM
this is different Richard, think i'm going to love this journey...
Lamoureux Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Thanks for coming back to it Harry.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 7:11 PM
suspense.. and a very interesting beginning.. :)! I shall read the others.. :)! Thanks for visiting my poem HAPpy New YEar.. :)!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 7:35 PM
It is my pleasure Olive!
Yvonne Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:00 PM
love it so far...part two here I come.
Nance Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 7:37 AM
I have an orange crush bottle on the shelf above my computer desk, along with an old 7 up, mountain dew and coke, glass bottle. I can't wait to see where your crush bottle ends up! ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:42 PM
I too like those old bottles. I was at a korean BBQ in Vancouver over the holidays and ordered a Canada Dray Ginger Ale and much to my surprise it came in a glass bottle.
Eastman Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Ah... An adventure awaits... Love when that happens!.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:40 PM
Thanks for reading my little series Carol!
Smith Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 2:20 PM
I love the beginning...off to see the rest
Lamoureux Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Thanks Tim, I like the Christmas photo!
Kiser Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 1:37 PM
What is it about orange crush that is so appealing? I loved it as a kid, too. Good piece.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 7:23 PM
Thanks, M.L.
Duggan Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Richard what a delightful story so far, can't wait to read number two, I do hope this is going to be a long story, great work and great subject. take care my friend............Vera.........
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Thanks Vera, I have a few ideas so stay tuned.
Callus Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:52 PM
I love it when my memory is jogged back in time. Can still remember the metal tanks filled with drinks and ice...not many fridges or freezer were around in those days! Most of my fav drinks have now disappeared (Paradise Lemonade...Queen Cola...Cinotto...) all produced in our little village drinks factory! Looking forward to your next episode:) // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Thanks Paul, If I actually think back it would have been Orange Fanta that I was drinking with the ribbed bottle.
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:18 PM
hey this is so nice, putting yourself as a pop bottle! on to part two.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Thanks for reading both parts.
Chircop Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Im curious to see what happened to our soda pop : )..Let me go read the next post ----->
Lamoureux Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:56 PM
I'm pleased you are enjoying my little tale.
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Very brilliant and impressive expressions, Merry Christmas, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram, I wish you a Merry Christmas as well.
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 7:52 AM
- Hey Richard - Love this one, well done !!! .... a Christmas smile to you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 8:35 AM
A Christmas smile and hug to you as well Anne-Lise.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:33 AM
Captivating and imaginative, superbly described! Excellent, dear Richard! What drink is next? Ha-ha!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 8:33 AM
Thnks Demetrios, I will stick to Orange Crush, there is less chance of getting into trouble *lol*.
Vaso Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Just when I think I am most the creative being in the universe, you outdo me!!!!! This is , well its amazing!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 1:25 AM
You are kind Arthur. Goodnight.
Sivey Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 10:26 PM
What a fantastic perspective from a soda bottle! In my poetry class that I have this semester I will have to write three poems that are from the perspective of an inanimate object, just like you did her! You could turn this in for credit if you took this class! I know you would have gotten an 'A' for this poem! I surely loved reading this awesome write here this evening! You have delighted me by your skill of writing this personal perspective piece! Great Work!!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Russell! So great to see you. Thanks for this thoughtful comment. I am so pleased you enjoyed my first instalment.
Walker  Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 6:32 PM
Nice Rick... Your story shall be intriguing one it seems. I will enjoy reading this as it unfolds. I like your choice of epithet ("Soda Pop"). Good memories are a fine thing to share... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 6:59 PM
Thanks Verlena.
Bear Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 1:55 PM
You really enjoyed the treat as there were never very many. Good memories are they not? Love Mom
Lamoureux Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 6:59 PM
I guess it makes me appreciate life more today.
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 1:15 PM
what a fascinating write Richard cant wait to read the next installment and also find out what inspired this write? hugs jan xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Thanks Jan, more poems to come for "Soda Pop".
Meade Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:14 AM
You crushed this one!! Taste so good -- I have not had one in a very long time . . . heading to the store! All the best my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 1:24 PM
I like the play on words David!
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