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Orange Crescent

husband was at the wheel that night driving back home from vacation I was trying hard to be awake legs folded on the passenger seat what was that— a half broken traffic light? I rubbed my eyes and blinked ten times but it wasn't a dream it sat resting on the overhead wires an orange crescent hanging low aligned with the traffic lights so low, I could reach my hand out the moon roof and grab it so orange, it looked like a piece of a setting sun so perfect an arc like a kid had drawn a circle with a geometry compass and erased the rest it changed shades orange to red played peekaboo tirelessly hiding behind trees and appearing again could not sleep a wink again had to be pulled out of the car when we reached home sorry to end our game that night Written ob 08/12/2016 Contest: Wordscapes by John Hamilton

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Date: 9/5/2016 9:43:00 AM
Imagination abounds in this lullaby-esque poem. Bravo! –-))
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Date: 8/15/2016 2:36:00 PM
what a wonderful wordscape poem Sara great imagery - I so love to see the moon in all its different phases:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/16/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Jan!

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