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Orange-Red Dreadlocks

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Out on the porch, proba

bly about a year ago..The sun coming up reminded me of dreadlocks in color the way the great artist had painted the lines in the sky..Sara

She wore orange-red dreadlocks Danced on the horizon far away Setting the woods on fire Stirring up all kinds of desire Roosters arose with voices of power Sleeply pines in silhouette still stood Dormant in cold and frozen twigs She stirred the air to warm and play Happiness she brought Sent the cold swiftly away

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M.I.A .

Date: 12/25/2011 7:39:00 PM

told you i'd come back and i simply have to write something about this beautiful piece you got here Sara. She came to live from your pen, wonderful!

Christopher Bunton

Date: 12/22/2011 12:54:00 PM

Beautiful Sunrise!

Robert Johnson

Date: 12/20/2011 11:35:00 AM

Beautiful mahn.

Don Johnson

Date: 12/19/2011 7:07:00 PM

fires get rid of old dead grass, Aboriginies light them, if you ask, the green then starts showing through, eat the lizards cooked well too, at last....love the poem Sara.

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/19/2011 6:23:00 PM

very curious. jhl

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/19/2011 4:48:00 PM

A fine piece of work. "Orange - red dreadlocks" - I have never seen that phrase in a poem before. Very original! Peace & love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2011 2:14:00 PM

Sara,this one....BEAUTIFUL !! oxox Love Anne-Lise

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/16/2011 1:17:00 PM

The glorious sunrise, personified! Beautiful one, Sara! My best wishes for blessings to you during this holy season. Love, Annalise

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/15/2011 10:18:00 PM

Wow! Wonderfully penned! Quite vividly beautiful! Always, Laura

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/15/2011 8:10:00 AM

Wonderful write I have read just now. Nicely worded this line 'She stirred the air to warm and play'. Loved it. Thanks for this new one and for your valuable comment. bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2011 6:13:00 PM

this is a great way to personify, Sara. WELL done!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2011 9:58:00 AM

Good morning Sara, how are you? a very sweetish dance... seems as if nature is dancing ... enjoyed,..p.d.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/14/2011 9:22:00 AM

I got some great mental pictures from this one! Love it

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2011 9:17:00 AM

Enjoyed Sara, so different, yet so you. love this. harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2011 7:42:00 AM

Wishing you glad tiding for the upcoming Holiday Season Sara. It is the time of year to reach out to old friends and new friends as well. As the old year ends and the New Year arrives I wish blessings to you and yours always. May you be blessed with inspiration and see your writing endeavors cascade upward in 2012. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/13/2011 4:45:00 PM

Beautiful write Sara! I enjoyed in particular the line, "...Stirring up all kinds of desire" That was a great line, you put a bolt in me of this desire! Awesome Work!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/13/2011 4:33:00 PM

interesting idea....enjoyed reading today!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/13/2011 1:47:00 PM

Sounds like someone from the 60's. They were all strange to me at that time.

Tony Lane

Date: 12/13/2011 1:13:00 PM

A free spirit I think.