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Optimist's Haiku I flew past the sky, Up, to the celeste, thinking What's past the sky's sky?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2012 6:43:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Patrick. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2012 1:08:00 PM
Welcome to the soup, Patrick! Great haiku this one! keep it up, and keep writing! oxox Laila
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